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Haiku, Flowers

flowers, soft petals the provocation of bees - stamens, quivering © Gail Foster 22nd May 2018

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Date: 7/9/2018 7:30:00 AM

A sensitive observation, engaging the senses, and touching on the summer season...Im in winter now, cant wait for summer ! ( a perfect haiku...)

Gail Foster
Date: 7/13/2018 5:38:00 AM

Thank you very much

Date: 5/23/2018 12:42:00 PM

Great imagery Gail..

Gail Foster
Date: 6/24/2018 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One. There are so many beautiful things to write about at this time of year.

Date: 5/22/2018 1:29:00 PM

Beautiful haiku with a lovely surprise ending! Well done! Hugs. Pandita

Gail Foster
Date: 6/24/2018 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for voicing that, Pandita

Date: 5/22/2018 6:43:00 AM

Check Soup mail.