Haiku, Flowers

flowers, soft petals
the provocation of bees -
stamens, quivering

© Gail Foster 22nd May 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 9, 2018 at 7:30 AM
A sensitive observation, engaging the senses, and touching on the summer season...Im in winter now, cant wait for summer ! ( a perfect haiku...)
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July 13, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Thank you very much
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May 23, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Great imagery Gail..
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June 24, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you, Silent One. There are so many beautiful things to write about at this time of year.
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May 22, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Beautiful haiku with a lovely surprise ending! Well done! Hugs. Pandita
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June 24, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for voicing that, Pandita
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May 22, 2018 at 6:43 AM
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