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Haiga - Haiku

still at the feeder caterpillars in decline trees rainwashed clean

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Virginia Waters

Date: 5/16/2018 5:03:00 PM

nice haiku but can't help thinking this beautiful blue bird could have been better named. Name makes me titter - bird cleans my heart. V

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/16/2018 7:50:00 PM

"Normally the mouse bit is dropped, yep, Great Tit - LOL Then there is the Blue, Crested, Bearded, Marsh, Willow, Coal and Longtail, all Titmice."

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/16/2018 1:38:00 PM

Hope we don't get too much rain, and for the birds sake too. Nice hakiu Mick. Did you take the pic ? Tom.

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/16/2018 6:23:00 PM

The inclement weather, (climate change), not totally related to climate warming, is now thought to be a combination of both pollution and the earth's axis tilting at an unprecedented rate toward the east. You'll find more info if you follow the Link. https://www.nasa.gov/feature/nasa-study-solves-two-mysteries-about-wobbling-earth. In answer to your question Tom I have not knowingly committed plagiarism and never added my copyright details to someone else's work in any form. I have had some of my photos published in books, on the internet by many sites, and on CD's. Google Mick E Talbot

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2018 11:54:00 AM

I wish my tits would come back Mick - i miss them:-( hugs jan x

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/16/2018 7:37:00 PM

............ Behave LOL