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Haibun

the incisive December winds blow with lancet chill of the arctic cold
through the snow-laden boughs of the defoliated trees, frozen long
in  dementia down to the  roots, forget once they have been green,
nesting the summer birds, all disappeared in some unknown verdant
pastures  beyond the  misty horizon from where driving the drifting     
cloud clumps the northern zephyr comes whistling and playing in the   
winter flute the carol tunes implying Christmas is in the air where my 
mind that  floats like the  feathers of the departed  far-away birds in 
the  ether of joy,  filling my heart’s cornucopia  with the memorable 
moments of the happy times, I’ll share with you all, so from the edge
of  the fading year when the new sun will rise  with our hearts filled 
with hope and bliss we shall embark on another journey on the garden 
path, at the end of which

the splendor of dew
shines on bronzed grass of meadow
future green canvas

December 14, 2019
Contest : December Or January Haibun
Sponsor : Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 2/7/2020 3:45:00 PM
Subimal, a masterful, seamless trajectory from winter bleakness to the hope and renewal of Spring in this poem. Fantastic imagery throughout. Congratulations on your #1 placement! ~ John
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Date: 12/14/2019 1:11:00 PM
I enjoyed this Subimal. Best of luck
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