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It's going to be another hot Amarillo day, but as I emerge from my car, the morning is still only warm with a gentle breeze blowing. I quickly cross the frontage road and head down the packed earth path. In the distance, I can see my destination, ten Cadillacs with hoods buried and tails sticking out of the ground. The last time I had seen Cadillac Ranch the cars were shiny and recognizable. Now, they are merely metal shells with their insides worn away, spray painted a gallery of colors. Hoping to add my touch to these masterpieces, I am disappointed to find the cars are surrounded by a pool of soggy clay mud, sure to adhere me to the ground as securely as the cars if I step in it. So, grabbing a purple spray can, I add my initial to the alternative works of art on the packed dirt, a small part of myself left behind until man and the elements wear it away, too. Cadillac garden front ends planted...tails aloft graffiti blossoms 6/29/18 for Mick Talbot's Haibun Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/7/2018 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Different and intriguing. Well done!
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Jeanne Hicks
Date: 7/7/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/5/2018 7:06:00 PM
Hi Jean, A perfect prose, so good I had to give it second place, congratulations. Sadly your haiku was not a haiku nor a senryu, with much respect, Mick
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Jeanne Hicks
Date: 7/5/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you. I really enjoy your contests.
Date: 6/29/2018 9:08:00 PM
Nice Haibun, Jeanne!
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Jeanne Hicks
Date: 6/29/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thank you.

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