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Hai-ku 1

Hai-ku Hi, cute, High coo Hai ,who? S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 30 mar 17, for Brian Strand's contest

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Date: 6/3/2015 11:59:00 PM
LOL. really cute
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Date: 5/23/2012 12:13:00 PM
Clever and sooo cute Jag, short and sweet is really specail! :)
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2012 10:28:00 PM
Jag, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 3/25/2012 8:03:00 PM
LOL, now that's a first. in my language, 'ku' is a suffix for possession. hai-ku here would mean 'my hello' ;)
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Date: 3/25/2012 6:20:00 PM
Cute one..Good luck in the contests..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2012 10:11:00 AM
hai means yes in japanese. so yes, keep writing.
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:51:00 AM
Hi-there, hai-NEW, hai-oh-boy-you-too? Hai-all-is-good-in-this-hai-stew. Hai-forms? TWO! Hugs to Jag, thanks for the comments. Cyndi
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Date: 3/24/2012 5:13:00 AM
woohhoo to you, jag!.. so unique!..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/23/2012 6:52:00 PM
Ai-choo to you ....sorry! cute poem!!
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Date: 3/23/2012 12:54:00 PM
Funny one.... :) :) - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/23/2012 11:21:00 AM
hahaha...very nice Jag...enjoyed.Thanks for your comment at my poem.
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Date: 3/23/2012 10:08:00 AM
nice word play - great piece
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