Had They Been Loved

Such a busy life some parents 
have, running here and running there...
never telling their kids to sit down
and have a serious talk with them.
Yes, all kids should be heard,
yes, all kids shouldn't be silent: that's
when they start to break down 
and take their anger somewhere.  

Don't turn your shoulders on them,
had they been heard: no harm
ever would have come to them;
had they been loved: no lonely
tears they would have shed in misery...
hold them tight and end their agony.

Be the teacher they need when they
seek answers, then they can understand 
themselves better and be very lovely;
be their best friend in any way you can.

Had they been loved as others:
no isolation they would have chosen;
had they been loved: their smiles
no sadness or pain would have known.

Song: Mad World by Gary Jules
Cliche': Frightened To Death 
Picture: # 1
Written on 4/21/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 5/14/2016 11:49:00 AM
congratulations on your win with this beautifully penned lyric poem . . .
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Andrew Crisci
Date: 5/14/2016 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings for your comment today. Your kindness has been appreciated. Have a great weekend. Hugs, Andrew.
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