Had I the Same Age

How wild is youth? This is rarely questioned,
it's an age where anything is permitted, 
and in the rush of days, it gets wasted;
who other than I detests what is so absurd?  

Had I the same age, I would take the advice
from whom has already lived and loved it;
don't question my harsh introspection:
you can learn how to use your intuition.

Is youth that time for feeling happy and silly,
letting someone else worry about a responsibility?
I would fairly agree to a certain degree, but I protest: 
how can somebody so young carry an extreme weight?

Live your youth care-free and don't give up anything,
do that later on you won't regret missing out on something; 
chase the glory of dreamers, accomplish those milestones,
and be remembered for your audacity and firmness!  

Had I the same age? I would conquer at will what is inexpugnable,,
writing down all my earned victories, either big or small;
whatever your ego is: let your aspiration climb any wall,
and if strength is the ultimate choice: your triumph is inevitable!

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Date: 9/23/2022 4:08:00 PM
very nicely penned
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Date: 9/23/2022 4:27:00 PM
Hi. Mystic. How's your evening going? Thanks for your kind comment, it has made me happy. I'm not on Poetrysoup all the time, but when I post new poems, it's a delightful experience. I wish success in your writing endeavors, and once again, thanks for your comment. Have a wonderful night.
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