H2o

The planet oxygen 
Contained two constant 
Continents called H, 
Both covalently bonded, 
Similar in shape, surviving 
In a scheme far superior than 
The disparity that dawned 
Between them. 
One believed in steam, 
While the other fought for ice 
To rule their tiny planet. 
As time was spent and 
Universes bent, 
Forming self sustaining 
Systems; 
The rationale the 
Over opinionated 
Orbs realized was that, 
Somewhere deep beyond 
The matter that made 
Them matter they 
Couldn’t overlook 
The reality that if they 
Busted their bonds 
And didn’t get along 
And not coexist 
Water wouldn’t subsist,
And existence for some 
Would never, ever, 
Even exist. 

Submitted for Ad’s “What is civility to you?” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/17/2010 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mike in Words Wounded's contest "What is Civility to you? ". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/11/2010 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Mike
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Date: 9/4/2010 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Mike on your big win in the Civility contest... awesome words and a wonderful win to enjoy.. safe holiday weekend with luv..
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Date: 6/28/2010 3:26:00 PM
If all could realize that coexistence is an eccential element for life as we know it.. Great thoughts that you have penned in tis one..Keep the inspiration level high and bless us with your overflow onto the pages of poetry...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:18:00 PM
Great spin on the contest, molecularly we all need the basic elements. great thoughts!!
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