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Gypsy Guy

Well, Gypsy Guy would rather die than hunker down in chains, be ridden south with bit in mouth, or heed the hold of reins. The ruling lot are in a spot, the boss man he complains: “The gypsies’ soul, I can’t control, my patience wears and wanes; they will not cede to common greed, which conquers far domains and furtive spies and news that lies have barely baked their brains. “But in the court of last resort the final fix remains: in boxcar bins with violins we’ll freight them out in trains (should one ask why, a quick reply: ‘It’s that which God ordains!’), and in the bogs, they’ll die like dogs, and everybody gains.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/17/2017 5:04:00 PM
What a wild untamed spirit. What a great poem. Congratulations Terry.
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Date: 1/16/2017 5:38:00 PM
Great rhythm, love how you work with all the inner rhymes. Congrats on your placement, Terry.
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Date: 10/5/2016 4:29:00 PM
In less than ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2016 2:31:00 AM
wow this is one great big ball of great flow! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/2/2016 6:48:00 PM
Awesome, Terry! A pleasurable yet deeply rich read. Congratulations on writing such a splendid piece
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Date: 10/2/2016 5:56:00 PM
EXCELLENT.....love the flow!!!!!!GRAND!!!CONGRATS To You......
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Date: 12/1/2012 6:25:00 PM
One heck of a good write there! Gypsy man! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my writes, much appreciated Light & Love
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Date: 11/15/2012 12:58:00 PM
Terry, just got a better internet..so now can do some reading... This piece grabs the guts and holds on until the end...the constant struggle of the spirit of individualism that gypsies have always represented...thanks for sharing this
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Date: 10/7/2012 11:00:00 AM
Terry, congrats on your win! Great monorhyme. Love, Kim
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:40:00 AM
Great poem Terry
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Date: 10/5/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's contest Terry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:35:00 AM
I love the rhythm of this wonderful poem Terry, as I said earlier. Not surprised to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations! Great work!
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:03:00 PM
Great poem here Terry!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/4/2012 1:24:00 PM
Great rhythm here. congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:53:00 AM
Fantastic one!!! Congratulations on your win, Terry!!! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:14:00 PM
Terry, congratulations In Susan's "Any poem under 14 lines" contest. Had fun reading all her winners. take care~ PD
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Date: 10/3/2012 12:34:00 PM
Stunning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:31:00 AM
You were on a roll here how did you slow it down, congratulations terry x
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:04:00 AM
Cool...many congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/3/2012 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations friend Terry for winning the contest. It’s beautifully written poem. Cheers!!!!!!!!!(^_^) Maria
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:16:00 AM
chilling, dear Terry.
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:37:00 PM
what an interesting one about the soul of a gypsy. Very nice and poetic!!
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Date: 9/26/2012 3:03:00 AM
Gorgeous and very touching and personal for me, my nan being one of the first of her people to leave her vardo and settle down with a fella who wasn't gypsy...I often wonder how many times she dreamed of her youth and ways natural to her....i keep reading this...beautifully put piece of poetry....tyvm karen
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Date: 9/24/2012 2:42:00 PM
what an awesome write, my friend - love it
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Date: 9/24/2012 5:27:00 AM
love my freedom,must have some gypsy blood running through me,lol,hope we don't all die like dogs
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