Gypsy Guy

Well, Gypsy Guy would rather die than hunker down in chains,

be ridden south with bit in mouth, or heed the hold of reins.



The ruling lot are in a spot, the boss man he complains:

“The gypsies’ soul, I can’t control, my patience wears and wanes;

they will not cede to common greed, which conquers far domains

and furtive spies and news that lies have barely baked their brains.



“But in the court of last resort the final fix remains:

in boxcar bins with violins we’ll freight them out in trains

(should one ask why, a quick reply: ‘It’s that which God ordains!’),

and in the bogs, they’ll die like dogs, and everybody gains.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Murray Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:04 PM
What a wild untamed spirit. What a great poem. Congratulations Terry.
Krampe Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Great rhythm, love how you work with all the inner rhymes. Congrats on your placement, Terry.
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:29 PM
In less than ten lines you have created magic with this winner…Way to go poet friend..Congrats on you being in the winners’ list..Sara
Scars Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 2:31 AM
wow this is one great big ball of great flow! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Garcia Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Awesome, Terry! A pleasurable yet deeply rich read. Congratulations on writing such a splendid piece
Guzzi Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 6:25 PM
One heck of a good write there! Gypsy man! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my writes, much appreciated Light & Love
Anderson-Throop Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Terry, just got a better internet..so now can do some reading... This piece grabs the guts and holds on until the end...the constant struggle of the spirit of individualism that gypsies have always represented...thanks for sharing this
Merryman Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Terry, congrats on your win! Great monorhyme. Love, Kim
Connelly Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Great poem Terry
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's contest Terry. Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:35 AM
I love the rhythm of this wonderful poem Terry, as I said earlier. Not surprised to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations! Great work!
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Great poem here Terry!Congrats on the win.
Johnson Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Great rhythm here. congratulations. Love, joyce
Gasun Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 12:53 AM
Fantastic one!!! Congratulations on your win, Terry!!! hugs:) Leonora
A   Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Terry, congratulations In Susan's "Any poem under 14 lines" contest. Had fun reading all her winners. take care~ PD
Grisetti Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 12:34 PM
Stunning poem. Congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 10:31 AM
You were on a roll here how did you slow it down, congratulations terry x
Rozario Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Cool...many congrats on your win.
Liwayway Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations friend Terry for winning the contest. It’s beautifully written poem. Cheers!!!!!!!!!(^_^) Maria
Collins Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 8:16 AM
chilling, dear Terry.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 6:37 PM
what an interesting one about the soul of a gypsy. Very nice and poetic!!
Deeks Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 3:03 AM
Gorgeous and very touching and personal for me, my nan being one of the first of her people to leave her vardo and settle down with a fella who wasn't gypsy...I often wonder how many times she dreamed of her youth and ways natural to her....i keep reading this...beautifully put piece of poetry....tyvm karen
Horne Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 2:42 PM
what an awesome write, my friend - love it
Palmer Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 5:27 AM
love my freedom,must have some gypsy blood running through me,lol,hope we don't all die like dogs
Onclaud Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 2:47 PM
magic, for certain, terry!.. this is really a hauntingly beautiful one! :) huggs!
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