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Gypsy Dance

Climb up the hill where gypsies hide, And breathe on the wind of a restless tide; Where notes of sorrow from a violin, Cry out to the night from a heart within. The day is dim and night is alive, And gypsies dance like bees in a hive; They spin and turn while the fire burns bright, And sparks fly up to kiss the night. Old men sit while weaving a tale, While young men sit drinking their ale; And fires of night flicker and glow, While the winds of night moan and blow. They dance too fast, they dance too far; They follow the light of a fallen star; But there in the sky a sickle shaped moon, Dances with gypsies in the fires of June.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/25/2013 11:11:00 AM
just love reading all your poetry,, another from way back,, and another wondrous gem....
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Date: 9/9/2012 12:36:00 PM
At least they have each other - being a renegade or living with poverty isn't so bad when you've got partners - I enjoy the simple charm you poeticly ascribe to this community Elizabeth - great write! J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/9/2012 12:33:00 PM
At least they have each other - being a renegade or living with poverty isn't so tough when you've got partners - I enjoy the simple charm you poeticly ascribe to this community Elizabeth - great write! J.A.B. %
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:09:00 AM
Wonderful poem I have enjoyed this now. Lovely gypsies. bl
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Date: 11/6/2011 6:48:00 PM
ah and you brought out the Gypsy in me ...the wild that is not allowed in so called civilization......... the wild one that dances to the fires and stars of night and flares up the smoldering within to burn it out and live in the freedom of it's after glow. NNIIICCCE
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Date: 9/9/2011 7:14:00 PM
What an imaginative poem, and VERY entertaining! The rhythm is near perfect and the story well told. I love the way your mind clicks:) Try my "Something Wicked" next.
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:14:00 PM
Really well done - no wonder you won 3 Stars for this one...soup's in the mail... :)
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:20:00 AM
A belated congratulations Elizabeth on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:58:00 PM
wow, I am glad to finally be seeing this one of yours. It is wonderful!
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:26:00 AM
Extremely beautiful. No one of the no. 1's for me. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/25/2011 6:45:00 AM
super congrats elizabeth on your first place win in the contest..with this dynamic entry luv.. see page 9 for winners list.. so honored to be sharing first with u ..wow..
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Date: 6/24/2011 11:31:00 PM
wonderful picture you have penned here Elizabeth.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:04:00 PM
thank you for the cooley comment.... nice image.... i like the bee hive dance... very unique.... take care,..Linda
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