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Gymnastics - One Liner

With elegance, strength, and grace, she lands her back flip in a four-inch space.



12/09/2015

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2015

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December 14, 2015 at 12:51 PM

TIM,, Congratulations on your wonderful one line win. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

December 13, 2015 at 8:02 PM

very nicely done. Glad to finally see this one did well on the winners list, Tim!!

December 11, 2015 at 2:54 PM

Wonderful one liner writes, TIm, congratulations on your win!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 10, 2015 at 11:13 PM

Congrats on wonderful write n win Tim!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 10, 2015 at 2:01 PM

Congratulations Tim.

December 10, 2015 at 1:42 PM

An elegantly presented one-liner, Tim. Gymnastics is a beautiful sport, but a momentarily error can leave one badly injured. Congrats on this fine win. // paul

December 10, 2015 at 12:10 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

December 10, 2015 at 9:54 AM

So graceful is the photo. nice line to win. Congrats Tim Anisha D

December 10, 2015 at 9:33 AM

Nice one Tim, your daughter? congrats to the both of you working in tandem on this one, you must be proud!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 10, 2015 at 7:01 AM

- Tim - One liners 4! - Congrats and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 10, 2015 at 6:08 AM

Congratulations Tim on your win!!

December 10, 2015 at 4:40 AM

one of my faves, tim..that girl in the visual is your daughter?.. so graceful!..congrats and huggs!

December 9, 2015 at 11:27 PM

Now thats a very creative one liner, now I wanna be a Volleyball coach and a gymnastics coach!!!

December 9, 2015 at 10:31 PM

Supurb! :-) jobgood luck!

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2015 at 9:03 PM

very good. I should have done a rhyming one too. I think that is the kind he is favoring!!

December 9, 2015 at 8:38 PM

A perfect 10.....OK....OK....a 7...take it up with poetry soup.

Beautiful Scars

December 9, 2015 at 2:16 PM

Perfect for the contest! Gl! -lu *smiles*

December 9, 2015 at 2:19 PM

Thanks Laura

Charmaine Chircop

December 9, 2015 at 1:41 PM

I can visualize her even without seeing the picture..I love your one liner.

December 9, 2015 at 1:49 PM

It is not showing hmmm...thanks Charma

December 9, 2015 at 12:19 PM

precision in one line, tim!.. you wow me as i remember nadia comaneci..huggs

December 9, 2015 at 1:05 PM

What boy didn't have a crush on her? ...The picture above is my daughter.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 9, 2015 at 12:15 PM

- A great line, Tim! - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :9

December 9, 2015 at 1:04 PM

Thanks A-L

December 9, 2015 at 12:10 PM

great one liner good luck in the contest - will drop by later to see the pic again:-) hugs Jan xx

December 9, 2015 at 1:04 PM

Thanks Jan...The picture is fixed

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