Guys

I'll tell you true I'm through with guys. Cause all they do is tell you lies. They break your heart and make you cry. And make you want to go and die. The way they treat you is a sin. Hey dig the guy who just walked in!

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Skat A

Date: 6/15/2016 11:17:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Marsha...skat

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/9/2011 3:23:00 PM

The door swings both ways. I have found some women in my lifetime who are cold, thoughtless, and cruel. No man is worth dying for anywhere in the world. You have some nice descriptive wording and rhyming that tells a cute little thing about yourself.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 1/4/2011 4:40:00 PM

Welcome to the soup. I feel a close connection with you but I cannot put my finger on it :-) Cool poem, more please

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 4:23:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out the contests too.. and ... good luck...and Happy New Year...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/1/2011 7:56:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marsha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2011 6:25:00 AM

Nice introspective thoughts on the unruly guys, Marsha. Happy New year

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2010 6:10:00 PM

Marsha, Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT