Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Guy Advice To a Friend

You tried to win her over
with dark chocolate and daisies
Passion on beds of clover
always works with the ladies

So why her indiscretions
She revealed it with a sigh
You didn't ask the right questions 
the rule book doesn't apply

See beneath all that glitters
her cool choreographed style
It's not hidden in twitters
try looking beyond her smile

Her love you cannot purchase
She can sense if you are fake
Do not play on the surface
dive down deep into her lake

Once she's truly discovered
surely passions will run deep
The depths of her uncovered
whispered secrets you must keep

She'll give you what you wish for
there is magic in her soul
If you just reveal your core
together you will be whole

Don't ever try to change her
that person she'll never be
If you try, she'll leave for sure
for that girl needs to be free!

Contest: "Men your advice to another man on females"
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
Written December 18, 2018

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Muhammad Imtiaz March 9, 2018 at 6:16 PM hi Richard it is beautiful rhyming with deep meaning containing wisdom. My Fav. i love it. Good morning to you as well , i will let you know once i have new piece. i really enjoyed your cooperation. "Her love you cannot purchase She can sense if you are fake Do not play on the surface dive down deep into her lake" Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2018 at 6:42 PM Thanks Muhammad, I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. For me I do not wish to control the person I am with. It is amazing to witness a flower blooming before me.

Susan Ashley February 23, 2018 at 6:29 PM Now I'm the one to be impressed, Richard. A brilliant poem with sage advice.. the way to a woman's heart is through her soul - so yes, 'Do not play on the surface - dive down into her lake!'.. Your poem is beautifully expressed; words of wisdom born of an insightful and responsive heart. Belated congrats on your wonderful trophy win. ~Susan Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2018 at 6:44 PM Sorry for late response. Thanks for such an uplifting response.

Marc Acrich February 15, 2018 at 9:09 AM Nice one A poem full of life

Melissa Tracy January 25, 2018 at 12:34 PM Congrats on your win! Such beauty within your words so much deeper than a smile :) Best wishes!

Gregory Richard Barden January 20, 2018 at 3:36 AM Congratulations and best wishes for your win, Richard - I hope your holidays were great! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy January 18, 2018 at 1:15 AM Congratulations, Richard on your great win and position. You are so right ...that person she'll never be.

Line Gauthier January 17, 2018 at 9:41 PM Congrats on your top win, Richard. Masterfully done.

John Hamilton January 16, 2018 at 1:10 PM Congrats Rick for a great win!!

Rhoda Tripp January 15, 2018 at 5:41 PM Congratulations on your 1st place! Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2018 at 6:59 PM Thanks Rhoda. It was a nice surprise.

Faraz Ajmal January 14, 2018 at 11:18 AM Many congrats on your win, but since you wrote it so well, your win was inevitable, a very brilliant write, your advise was really good, that don t change her, love her how they are and even we shouldn t change ourselves for anybody else, continue to write as yours poems are really good, good luck and thanks for commenting on my poem Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2018 at 9:36 AM A great comment, thanks for the visit.

Alexis Y. January 14, 2018 at 2:12 AM Hi Richard, I told you this was a winner. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2018 at 9:43 AM Thanks Alexis.

Subimal Sinha-Roy January 13, 2018 at 10:26 PM Congratulations, Richard on your fine win. Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2018 at 9:37 AM Thanks Subimal.

Eve Roper January 13, 2018 at 10:25 PM Great advice, Richard, never change her . Congratulations on your win hugs Eve Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2018 at 9:43 AM Thanks and a big hug back.

CayCay Godwin January 13, 2018 at 9:37 PM Despite impressive poem quality, after reading comments I must, have to, shout "WOMEN ARE NOT ALL THE SAME, MEN ARE NOT ALL THE SAME." I have a high tolerance for differences, but apparently, I have none for sameness. Sorry to be inappropriate at your congratulations party, I did try very hard to behave. Also, I seem to be the only one who went to the gutter after reading 'dive down deep in her lake'- just happily jumped on in. Oh Tim, Tim was already laying in there! Curtsy, exit stage right CayCay Godwin January 15, 2018 at 7:06 PM I have verbally spanked my entire self entirely for leaving these comments and shared same with Brenda. Thank you for your diplomatically worded response, if I had but done the same .... Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2018 at 9:46 AM I have never met two women who are the same and that is a good thing. I enjoyed your provocative comment CayCay.

Heidi Sands January 4, 2018 at 8:12 AM This is a great , well written poem with excellent advice. Good luck in the contest Richard :) Happy New Year! Richard Lamoureux January 4, 2018 at 8:24 AM Thanks Heidi.

Carol B. January 1, 2018 at 2:42 PM Fantastic poem and excellent advice. Happy New Year Richard. Richard Lamoureux January 11, 2018 at 9:00 AM Hi Carol, sorry I missed this one.

Eileen Manassian December 30, 2017 at 4:17 PM Beautiful advice from a true gentleman, Richard. Lovely. I'm in Germany at the moment. Spending New Year with family here. Wishing you the best in the new year, dear. Richard Lamoureux January 1, 2018 at 2:49 PM I hope you are having a great time Eileen. Hugs Ric.

Becca Teagan December 27, 2017 at 10:55 AM "dive down deep into her lake" yes, and search for her hidden treasures, this is what makes passion come alive. Very good advice to the men, Rick. Richard Lamoureux December 27, 2017 at 12:47 PM Thanks Becca, I’ve always wanted to be a deep sea diver.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 26, 2017 at 3:40 PM Hey, bruh where was you when I needed this advice forty years ago ... lol! Splendid wisdom offered in this mighty fine poem, Richard. Words of truth always echo w/faithful affirmations. And so it is w/this beautiful poem. Love and peace always. Richard Lamoureux December 26, 2017 at 4:03 PM As always your comments shine. Thanks for your visits today Freddie.

Ingrid Showalter Swift December 26, 2017 at 10:01 AM Love it Richard Lamoureux December 26, 2017 at 4:03 PM Thanks Ingrid.

Connie Marcum Wong December 26, 2017 at 12:30 AM EXCELLENT advice Richard! You appear to know and understand a women's heart well Richard. I hope this really does well in the contest for it is very deserving. I hope your Christmas was merry and bright! Blessings, Connie Richard Lamoureux December 26, 2017 at 4:02 PM Yes we had a lovely Christmas with our son in his new home. I hope yours was good as well.

Richard D Seal December 25, 2017 at 7:43 PM Hi Rick, Sage advice indeed and nicely written . Thanks for your Christmas wishes, Merry Christmas to you and all your family. Take care, Richard Richard Lamoureux December 26, 2017 at 4:01 PM Thanks Richard, I hope you had a great Christmas.

Nathan D. December 25, 2017 at 3:17 PM Good luck in contest and merry xmas Richard Lamoureux December 25, 2017 at 4:32 PM Thanks for all the visits Nathan. I hope you are having an amazing Christmas.

Peter Walsh December 25, 2017 at 3:47 AM The advice is good for both the female and the male Rich...nice piece brother...Happy Christmas to you and yours ... Richard Lamoureux December 25, 2017 at 8:22 AM Thanks Peter, I hope your day is unfolding exactly how you imagined it would.

Tim Smith December 24, 2017 at 8:40 AM Yes we need to dive into her depths... Merry Christmas Richard. Richard Lamoureux December 24, 2017 at 9:36 AM Thanks Tim.

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