Gushing Destruction

As the oil gushes freely from the hole
The ocean currents disperse it abroad
Fish, birds all sea creatures await tole
This time the tole awaits for thee and all

No just sealife, waterfoul, oysters, clams
This could mean less food on our grocer's shelf
Of course, there will be biscuits, even jam
But what about fish, oysters fried by a chef

As that oily sustance keeps spreading
All around the Gulf who's to say where will stop
It could bounce all around the globe
Might take a year or two but who even knows

That oil might slip into that slow boat to China
On the submarine in the deepest ocean
Maybe get on your bassboat moored under oak tree
As the cooing Dove calls to me how long 'twill be

When the end will come no one knows
This could be the start of those woes
Spoken of in Revelations when one-third
Of the sea creatures meet their destruction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kohls Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 12:41 AM
Sara, thank you for your comment... this was a great read and the revelation verse gave me the chills...Fantastic!! Kurt....
Chachere Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 11:28 PM
I can only imagine how much the ocean would be suffering from this oil spill. thats horrible really, to watch yet, another ruin happen on earth. -always&forever lynette
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Sadness envelopes the ocean and land with this disaster and your poem states it so very well Sara.. hope for resolve quickly but it looks very bleak... if prayers were ever needed.. its now.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 5:33 AM
It's tragic the oil spill in the Gulf. They should fine BP massively and put all monies into a team to combat these spillages in the future, because there will be more. And for every conglomerate whether working on land or at sea, they have to pay a premium of millions of dollars before they can operate >> James
Eggins Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 5:14 AM
well done Sara its been the job of the poet to tell the world of tragedy since time began ... wonderful poem ... love Jayne
Johnson Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 8:33 PM
This is a great and timely poem. I don't think anyone know just how destructive this has been and will be. They may have killed everything in the sea. Thank you for your kindly comments. Love, joyce
Freeman Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Could well be the prophesy, spoken in the bible, Sara. I see You cot around to reading my Bloke poem. smile. Thanks for your comments today. Agape, Moses
K. Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 8:13 PM
What a very apt title, Sara! The Gulf oil spill is truly disturbing and you've captured this in your poem--way to go with this one--if this is for the contest, I wish you the best in it! --nikko :)
Austin Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Yes! It seems man had been slowly destroying the planet. At present man is doing so at an accelerated speed. What will screw-up next? Great write. LOve, daver
Culverhouse Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 7:24 AM
preach on lady!! enjoyed
Dvorkis Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Interesting poem Sara. The reference to revelations at the end is very telling indeed. Enjoyed reading. -Yoni
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