Get Your Premium Membership

Gunfight In Old Abilene

Gunfight in old Abilene With his hat drawn way down, reins loose in his hands His horse sweating pints, the sun burning down The dust from the trail was choking his throat The Abilene sign, said, two miles to go He rode into town, stared the folk down He pulled up his horse at the watering trough All scuttled inside as his boot hit the ground The word was soon spread, that he was in town His aim to avenge, a brother who’d died By hand of a cowpoke, o’er game o’ cards Known to be cheating and fast with a gun He’d drawn and fired on unarmed man Stepped out the poke, with a gun on each side The stranger he sees with a look in his eye Some paces they took, no words were exchanged They stood face to face, staring each down Silence it fell, the nerves were of steel Dust blew around on the faintest of breeze The desolate street, unreal in the scene The stranger stood waiting, death in his eye The air, it was crushed, as the guns they were fired Bullets passed wild, on wings of hate A thud, a cry, a hit was made One fell to the ground, the sun burning down The dust and the smoke, cleared from the air Onto the street, the folks gathered round Amazed at the speed the actions had been Declaring the duel had seen a fair fight He mounted his horse, tugged brim of hat, His mission complete, justice on course A man of the old west who never looked back Where sun had gone down for the poke on the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/23/2015 8:42:00 AM
It was fun to read this one again Richard.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2013 8:03:00 PM
You had me right there on the scene with this vivid write, Richard. Awwww, I used to love the old westerns as a child. Good work, my friend. Licia :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/4/2013 11:19:00 PM
I normally don't care much for scenes from an old western era. But this didn't feel so cheesy... instead it felt like something that actually could have happened. There's a strange sort of coldness and utter calmness in the cowboy seeking revenge, that I oddly liked.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2013 9:48:00 AM
Very good poem here! It has a realistic feel to it. As if I can see the events taking place. Good job!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/11/2013 4:57:00 PM
Such great images come to mind reading this action packed duel. I guess it didn't take much to start a two man war back then. So cool! Luv, Lizzie
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2013 10:10:00 PM
This is a great tale and so well told. Recaptures the wild west very well.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/6/2013 3:11:00 PM
Richard; I just love this kind of poetry. This is amazing. If it's Abilene Texas, I was there a couple of months ago. Thanks for sharing. Is this for the contest? Lucilla
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2013 2:12:00 PM
- Reminds me of the movies we were allowed to watch on Saturday nights when I was "little" - Nice to read your story / poem Richard! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2013 8:12:00 PM
You have just described one of the many western movies my husband has been watching constantly since he lost his job a few months ago. He tells me that he wishes he lived in the cowboy days and I think he would have loved those times. Good one.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2013 10:45:00 AM
Almost like the wild west... Richard, are you talking about "Abilene Texas," :-) I like the old western wear in your story. Justice won, and a reason to never look back. I'm glad we don't settle debts this way no more... xox~ Linda
Login to Reply
Seal Avatar
Richard D Seal
Date: 4/4/2013 4:28:00 PM
oooooooo I hope Gypsy's not from Kansas lol
Seal Avatar
Richard D Seal
Date: 4/4/2013 4:20:00 PM
The real Abilene to me is always the Texas one, them Kansas cowboys could never live up to the texans lol erm sorry Kansas
Date: 4/4/2013 10:20:00 AM
I saw it all in my mind's eye! Was the stranger a handsome Clint Eastwood type? Great write, Richard. :) Lovely use of words. You're a great storyteller!
Login to Reply
Seal Avatar
Richard D Seal
Date: 4/4/2013 4:25:00 PM
Tut Auntie, how can you be so shallow, why do they always have to be tall, dark and handsome lol
Date: 4/3/2013 8:10:00 PM
I am a sucker for old westerns. This did not disappoint. Thanks for your visits and comments, I enjoyed reading them today.
Login to Reply
Seal Avatar
Richard D Seal
Date: 4/4/2013 4:27:00 PM
Yes me too at westerns

Book: Reflection on the Important Things