Gunas of Light and Love

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Tamas I began in my mother's womb where darkness clothed me still carrying taste of death upon my tongue I suckled and kicked free there were dancing lights and tears in the Universe gathering me to life it didn't take long I did forget, I pierced the veil and wailed like a knife Rajas: I drank the nectar of the wild flower consumed the salinity of my goods entered into karma like a Gita in a wave of passion, no longer was I wood pulsing into life I sipped the juices of my passion and enjoyed the rays with third eye open I was guided through my living numbered days Sattva: Like a pear tree laden with heavy fruit, life began to take its toll like Saraswati I let go, then held on to a mala and a palm leaf scroll swept away by a joy so pure, I found the core of love's own goal there was nothing else I needed so I climbed the lotus of extol All lies melted away in the face of truth and revelation , I lost myself in worship, became a sweet oblation. Date: April 17, 2021 Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker Contest Name: Where are we headed

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Date: 4/17/2021 4:22:00 PM
you went deep with this one my friend, seems you have a kinship with what was asked...good luck
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Date: 4/17/2021 6:17:00 PM
I have an appreciation for all religions, they all lead to closeness, being Christian, we used other means, but all in all, what makes us better humans beings, is all good, thank you for stopping be Frederic, it was much appreciated.
Date: 4/17/2021 4:08:00 PM
I looked this up when I perused his contest and this reads like it would be a good contender to me for the contest. I don't understand it enough to write one. LOL..Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/17/2021 6:17:00 PM
It speaks of Hinduism Sara, I am glad you took the time to read and comment, sending blessings your way : )
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