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Gun

Does not always smell gunpowder
Even
The license Double-barreled shotgun
Hanging with the deer
on the wall
But if the gun
Be translated into any language alive.
The smell of death

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Beata Agustin

October 13, 2024 at 11:33 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Robert Warlov

December 3, 2016 at 12:23 PM

Living men and living languages. The wall displays all the dead equally- gun, deer and license. "Find the cost of freedom, buried in the ground," - Steve Stills (C. S. & N. )

Michelle Mac Donald

October 29, 2016 at 10:25 AM

Welcome to the Soup, mostafa! Oh, I feel for the deer for they are such docile creatures! Actions maim, but what if their high pitched voices were their defense? They wouldn't wish to kill, only to be allowed their freedom. Have fun on the Soup!! Best regards, Mikki

Rhoda Galgiani

October 27, 2016 at 5:25 PM

Interesting, but true concept of the 'gun'! rg

Sirat Ahmad Haidary

October 27, 2016 at 6:24 AM

Very nice poem! good luck

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October 25, 2016 at 5:22 PM

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