Gulp

There was a lady from Connet
Who got a bee in her bonnet.
She untied the string
To be rid of the thing
But her mouth opened upon it.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/23/2015 9:08:00 PM

G'day Paul... there's no sting in the tale in your limerick Paul, it's the other end - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/30/2015 9:35:00 PM

Ah ha . . . makes one wonder if the bee got properly oriented inside the poor woman's mouth or esophagus. No matter. As always, Lindsay, I value and appreciate your comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/23/2015 10:07:00 AM

You title makes very clear the unfortunate happening in this clever limerick Paul. I have known somone this happened to! Loved it!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/30/2015 9:01:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comment. I hope 2016 treats you and your loved ones well.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2015 4:43:00 AM

Very clever humour Paul :-) hope you are keeping well:- hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/13/2015 8:34:00 PM

Hmmm . . . what happened to my earlier response, I wonder. In any event, comments from you, Jan, are always music to my ears. Blessings on you and your loved ones (accompanied by hugs). Paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/12/2015 10:57:00 PM

Ouch! Cute limerick, Paul! Love, Kim

Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/15/2015 8:13:00 PM

Kim, I thanked you earlier but it seems to have vanished. Thank you for your kindness and thoughtfulness in commenting. I value your feedback. Hope all is well. hugsxxx Paul

Theresa Cw

Date: 11/12/2015 8:20:00 PM

I think I have to agree with what Catie has said below, but I sure did get a giggle and a laugh out of this, Paul. many hugs Theresa

Paul Schneiter
Date: 11/13/2015 8:31:00 PM

Thank you, Theresa. Writing the limerick was worth the effort inasmuch as you got a laugh out of it. Please know of my appreciation for taking time to stop by. hugs xxx Paul

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