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Gull Point

I know you so well now that I can instantly capture your moods. Watching as the tide ebbs - you regretfully reveal hidden treasures. Children with small nets probe into your very soul, and seabirds plunder your bounties. If I listen carefully I can hear you cry. Oh but the tide incoming is a different matter. Water gently chuckles through parched crevices, small creatures return where they belong. Behold, seaweeds dance in joy, and once again rejuvenated you count your losses, lick your wounds. Written: circa 1994 ——— Gull Point is in the East Coast Bays of Auckland, New Zealand. An old haunt.

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Date: 5/27/2024 6:08:00 AM
Must admit I’ve never seen seaweed dance in joy before but there is something joyful about the changing of the tides. So many creatures and living things depend on its ecosystems. The cycle of life and all that, especially if you’re a gull at Gull Point. Nice.
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:54:00 PM
Very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2022 3:38:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful, Craig. I especially love: Water gently chuckles through parched crevices.Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 1/21/2022 5:45:00 AM
The personification of Gull Point is spot on. I can imagine the rocky projection 'licking its wounds' from a churning sea. Strong images of land + sea in your poem. Congratulations! Brian
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