Guilty Secret

One icy night, the snow was deep;
She wanted to be wooed;
He went out on his bicycle –
As always, in the nude.

He reached his lady, frozen stiff;
His parts encased in ice;
‘Oh, keep this secret, please,’ he begged,
‘But PJs would be nice.’

They share a guilty secret now –
The nudists Claire and Ed –
They wear no clothes in daylight hours;
But thermal gear to bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
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June 3, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Jack. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2011 at 6:10 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 6:10 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., jack
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June 2, 2011 at 10:09 PM
Jack, ~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thanks for always supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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June 2, 2011 at 9:35 PM
Congrats Jack on another marvelous win with this funny write luv.. enjoy.. smiling..luv..
Johnson Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Funny and well done. Congratulations Jack. Love, Joyce
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June 2, 2011 at 7:46 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! really makes me smile.. great funny piece.. ^_^ ***jun-jun
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March 26, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Hi Jack, I left a note on Gert's version of the poem too. You BOTH have to enter your poems separately and I think I made that clear to him. People are having trouble signing on to the Soup today because ads are blocking the login page. Very few poems have been posted today as a result and the comments on those posted are few as well. Love, Carolyn
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March 26, 2011 at 12:06 PM
What a hoot! That's sooo funny, Jack. Hope Claire and Ed live in a nudist colony; they'd be arrested here in the states. Love, Carolyn
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