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Guilty Secret

One icy night, the snow was deep; She wanted to be wooed; He went out on his bicycle – As always, in the nude. He reached his lady, frozen stiff; His parts encased in ice; ‘Oh, keep this secret, please,’ he begged, ‘But PJs would be nice.’ They share a guilty secret now – The nudists Claire and Ed – They wear no clothes in daylight hours; But thermal gear to bed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jack. Excellent piece. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:10:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:10:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., jack
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:09:00 PM
Jack, ~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thanks for always supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:35:00 PM
Congrats Jack on another marvelous win with this funny write luv.. enjoy.. smiling..luv..
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:06:00 PM
Funny and well done. Congratulations Jack. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:46:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! really makes me smile.. great funny piece.. ^_^ ***jun-jun
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Date: 3/26/2011 1:04:00 PM
Hi Jack, I left a note on Gert's version of the poem too. You BOTH have to enter your poems separately and I think I made that clear to him. People are having trouble signing on to the Soup today because ads are blocking the login page. Very few poems have been posted today as a result and the comments on those posted are few as well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2011 12:06:00 PM
What a hoot! That's sooo funny, Jack. Hope Claire and Ed live in a nudist colony; they'd be arrested here in the states. Love, Carolyn
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