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9/3/2024 for Nursery Rhymes 7 Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper

Guiding Light

Twinkle, twinkle, how you shine,
little guiding light of mine.  
So many things for us to see.
We will see them, you and me. 
Some will be for the first time.  
Many mountains we will climb.
One day, I'll find love so true
when my flame takes me to you.
Twinkle, twinkle, how you shine,
little guiding light of mine.
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Miller Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 1:18 AM
Very nice, congratulations.
Crandall Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 9:04 PM
Thanks Terry!
Poteet Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 11:21 AM
nice, David. I like the undertones of the light, your love, and sharing moments so divine.
Crandall Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 8:24 PM
Thank you Reason, I appreciate your nice comments!
Greenhough Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 5:59 PM
This was enjoyable. The rhyme was perfect.
Crandall Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 6:03 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it.
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