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9/3/2024 for Nursery Rhymes 7 Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper

Twinkle, twinkle, how you shine, little guiding light of mine. So many things for us to see. We will see them, you and me. Some will be for the first time. Many mountains we will climb. One day, I'll find love so true when my flame takes me to you. Twinkle, twinkle, how you shine, little guiding light of mine.

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Date: 10/1/2024 1:18:00 AM
Very nice, congratulations.
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David Crandall
Date: 10/1/2024 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Terry!
Date: 9/29/2024 11:21:00 AM
nice, David. I like the undertones of the light, your love, and sharing moments so divine.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/29/2024 8:24:00 PM
Thank you Reason, I appreciate your nice comments!
Date: 9/3/2024 5:59:00 PM
This was enjoyable. The rhyme was perfect.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/3/2024 6:03:00 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it.

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