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Guess Not

I guess goodbye is another hello to you I express my emotions to you, what's new I suppose you want to see me break I expose my errors and flaws for your sake I am not made of perfection If I was, I wouldn't be here I am not always walking your direction If I was, I wouldn't have my inner cheer Hi, I guess you're going to leave so soon Bye, go ahead and be gone this afternoon I won't miss you for long Maybe, I am just plain wrong Hoping something bad isn't going to happen I let out my furious lions from the darksome den Moping around won't do me any good You'd understand, being misunderstood I knew you would... I know you should... Hon, I bet I could... I knew you would... I know you should... Dear, I bet I could... Do more harm than good Go... If you want to go! Know... That I still love you so But, obviously, You don't care Well, possibly, So do I if I dare I guess goodbye is another form of hello I am a mess and yet, you stay pretty mellow I best be away from you and you can do the same Because I don't want to be the one to take the blame I also don't want to hurt you anymore It's as if you want to fight me some more I had enough with this horrible war Loving you is like completing a year-long chore Bye... We both depart for now on Hi... To another wish I wish upon Hope you all the well In your journey of farewell Are you still living your heavenly hell? Can't you tell you're under a wicked spell!? Um...guess not!

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Date: 4/1/2018 7:23:00 AM
You express your emotions and feelings so powerfully and i'm sure many can relate to the turbulence of relationships especially in our youth:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/2/2018 5:35:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Jan :) I appreciate it so much. So true!! ^_^ ~JWE
Date: 3/29/2018 2:18:00 PM
Loved your honesty and raw feelings in here. Beautifully expressed my dear friend, JW... hugs :)
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Date: 3/30/2018 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much! I tried my best with this one. Hugs back at ya ! -JWE
Date: 3/28/2018 6:40:00 PM
I can really identify with this poem. I appreciate the abruptness and creativity of your sentiments! Glad to see you're still at it when I have more time I'm gunna read some more!
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Date: 3/28/2018 11:46:00 PM
:) Amazing! Thanks for commenting. Haven't had comments in months. These verses come from the heart and mind at its vulnerable stages. Do read more and comment away!! ^_^ -JWE
Date: 3/28/2018 3:53:00 AM
Announcement: more poems and lyrics, coming up March and April. Thanks for reading. Do comment too. Thanks! -JWE
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