Guardian of Air

As tangy waft  careens into my mind
To softly rouse a glittering twilight,
I frolic with the northern breeze, refined 
On imprints of an ever- threading night. 

And copper-like, my senses mildly clothed
with fibrils tracing ripples on warm flesh;
this zephyr cool guides evensong hollowed
by a mystique startling birds’ tunes, afresh.

Until the trade-wind fades before new morn
oh guardian of air will bid me still; 
my breath feeding the hours with time reborn 
till dewy waft on skyline claims goodwill.

That I, a child of moon, shall testify
as witness to the gentle billow’s sigh.



My Favourite Forms - Haibun or Sonnet
Contest of Heather Ober
9/17/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 9:51 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win **SKAT**
Makama Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 8:52 AM
longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 5:15 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win nette!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 4:21 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Nette! I knew I would see this on the winner's list.
Cheema Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Utterly a romantic write Nette! Congrats on your dewy win!
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Such a beautiful Sonnet, Nette. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Beautifully written and well constructed. Well done SonNette.
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 3:13 PM
way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Great topic used ...Sara
Devnath  Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Beautiful poem expressed beautifully. It's a refreshing gem. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Sathasivam Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 3:00 AM
Excellent . Nice poem and very an impressive entry for the contest. Enjoyed reading it. All the best. TFS
Muideen Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Wow!!! What an awesome write, I love how it was constructed... Good luck in the contest..........A.M.
Austin Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Outstanding sensitivity. I can feel it in my veins. Love, daver
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Wow...what an impressive entry for the contest Nette! I always know I am going to read something way above average when I see your posts. Your talent is a beacon to so many of us!
Parker Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 8:48 PM
I was captivated by the first stanza and held prisoner by the final two, your couplet held the key to my imprisonment..good luck in the contest
Gonza Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 3:15 PM
I can really feel this rhapsody. Later, I'll have a date with the wind. Your diction and poetry enthralling! Proud to have been chosen in your contest--thank you, Nette.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 2:52 PM
- Not your first .... but it was "fine" :)))) - Good luck in the contest - hugs and smile // Anne-Lise :)
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