Guardian Moon of Youth

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Tonight I saunter with the wise moon Gleaming upon life’s pebbles ashore Which reflects youthful bliss down a hill... Across woods, lit is this ancient hill Illumined by crowns of ruby moon Brushing dappled tints on grass ashore : Childhood play unfolds through waves ashore While old songs drool along town’s hill Imprinted by my guardian moon. ~ Entranced, moon ashore beams at youth’s hill! Contest of Charles Messina: A Tritina For Messina 2/19/2019

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 4:58:00 PM

Lovely, netter. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/24/2019 4:35:00 PM

beautifully penned nette, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 2/24/2019 4:10:00 PM

So many great poems in my contest, Nette. This is one of them. Love the pic that goes with it. Congratulations on your win. hugs Charlie :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/20/2019 9:32:00 PM

imagery is fabulous, words outstanding , and perfect form... good luck in then contest...love the painting :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2019 5:17:00 AM

Oh how beautiful - a full moon - I always try to picture a face on the moon - your picture is awesome! Best wishes for the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.