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Guardian Moon of Youth

Tonight I  saunter with the wise moon
Gleaming upon  life’s pebbles ashore
Which reflects youthful bliss down a hill...

Across  woods, lit is this ancient hill 
Illumined by  crowns of ruby  moon
Brushing  dappled  tints on grass ashore :

Childhood  play unfolds through waves ashore
While old songs drool along town’s hill
Imprinted by my guardian moon.

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Entranced,  moon ashore beams at youth’s hill!


Contest of Charles Messina: A Tritina For Messina
2/19/2019

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Line Gauthier Date: 2/25/2019 4:58:00 PM Lovely, netter. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/24/2019 4:35:00 PM beautifully penned nette, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 2/24/2019 4:10:00 PM So many great poems in my contest, Nette. This is one of them. Love the pic that goes with it. Congratulations on your win. hugs Charlie :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/20/2019 9:32:00 PM imagery is fabulous, words outstanding , and perfect form... good luck in then contest...love the painting :) Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/20/2019 5:17:00 AM Oh how beautiful - a full moon - I always try to picture a face on the moon - your picture is awesome! Best wishes for the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/19/2019 4:58:00 PM Glad you saw the super moon it greatly inspired you. Tom. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/19/2019 2:57:00 PM A gorgeous pic to go with your awesome imagery! Login to Reply

Carly Lalion Date: 2/19/2019 2:12:00 PM We rarely forget special moments of youth. Exquisitely penned ; perfect! Thank you for going through my recent work. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2019 12:55:00 PM - Gorgeous written, Nette :) - (+ an adorable image :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply