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Guardian Angel Dear

You see me at my birth, Like a fresh flesh dumbbell; Sing lullabies with mirth, As silent as mumble; Ease me, in quilt of care, lest I fall and crumble... You fix your eyes on me, At my sleep dream and wake; Tingles and smiles in me, You make like fancies fake; My psycho-physical soul-soothing solace sake... My childhood you take care, Like hens to their chicks do; Adulthood with joys fair, Like petals and blooms, glue; Crystal-like, my thought and words, you make glassy true... When I face test of death, When God calls me home back; My body with no breath, Lies like a torn rag sack; You pave, for my journey, a peace-filled divine track... May my moments, betwixt, Beams of hope, Angel dear! May my mind and heart fixed, On God the polestar rear; Thus, may my grave, heavenly womb-like comfort bear...! 12 December 2021 ''A'' Forms, New Poems, 10 or more lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/28/2022 3:51:00 AM
Very profound final line. I often forget to acknowledge my Guardian Angel whereas in childhood I always said my prayer to her and felt her near. Best, SuZ
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Date: 12/31/2021 4:35:00 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with your wonderfully penned poem ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 12/23/2021 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your talent. An excellent and fantastic bit of poetry, your "Guardian Angel Dear." Everything about it is lovely. Enjoy your holiday season!
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Date: 12/23/2021 9:29:00 AM
Hi Christuraj, You have penned such a well-written write about a guardian angel. Well done. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2021 9:00:00 AM
Chris, what a beautiful write on your Guardian Angel in Alexandrine form... Congratulations on your win in the contest... Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/23/2021 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Christuraj! Wonderfully penned in your poetic way. Blessings to you.
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Date: 12/23/2021 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Guardian Angel Dear" is a beautiful/wonderful write. Love It. Have a Blessed Christmas....................
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Date: 12/22/2021 7:11:00 PM
Wow!Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for blissfully exposing angel's belief in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:34:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/22/2021 3:05:00 PM
So angelic a writing! Of sublime beauty is the whole feel! Deserving the honour and recognition! Congratulations on your win, Christuraj! So much pleased reading your wonderful poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/23/2021 4:33:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/12/2021 10:04:00 PM
Love your Guardian Angel, Christuraj, and the poetry.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/13/2021 9:38:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/12/2021 11:06:00 AM
nicely done. Gosh I do not even know this form. I too want to do my poem on angel
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