Guardian Angel

I have a little angel who upon my shoulder lies
She tells me stories about heaven, it has golden peaceful skies
I have a little angel, she is always bright and gay
And when i’m sad or feeling down she takes the pain away
One day, I saw a glowing light upon my silver screen
A dearest friend had sent me words that had remained unseen
I opened up the template, expecting pure elation
But woe is me the only words were ones of devastation
They told me I was worthless and I saw that it was true
And now I realize what they say is very far from new
Without my little angel I am lost and I can see
The silence in his golden eyes when I asked him if he loved me
I am screaming for my angel when I know there isn’t time
Her crystal eyes are turning black, pale hands reaching out for mine
She’s sprawled out on her back, stare as vacant as a cave
She is dreaming for a chance to help the one she couldn’t save
I take the hope in silver steel and put it right between my eyes
Going with my little angel
I hope she’s right about the skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/30/2016 8:54:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup:) Your talent and Love for poetry surely Sparks through this wonderful write:) and let me tell you, your Guardian Angel is sure right about the skies:}
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Date: 3/30/2016 6:09:00 AM
Evol, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:32:00 AM
Wow again Amazing, Im still trying to figure out how to reach the level you are on. I am Inspired by you
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