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Grrreeble Left the Zoo

Betty and Johnny, who were seven and eight, lived close to the zoo, very near the front gate. They visited often, with their mom and their dad, and always told Gran about the fun that they had. One day as the wind blew through the Crumpledink trees' tickling the crinkly bright yellow leaves. Johnny and Betty decided to play, out on the porch, where they'd stay there all day. They opened the door, but to their surprise, a blue fuzzy creature, smallish in size, jumped up from the chair and stretched out his hand. "Pleased to meet you my friend," his words rather bland. "Who are you?" said Betty with a sheepish grin as she held out her hand and his fur touched her skin. "I am what I am, and my name is that too, I'm a Grrreeble," he said, "and I live at the zoo." "Then what are you doing here at our house?" asked Johnny, his voice squeaked like a mouse. "I saw you at the zoo in the star gazing dome. You seemed so nice, I followed you home." "But you can't stay here," Johnny croaked like a frog, "So, back to the zoo, to the zoo you must go!" Betty looked at the Grrreeble and said, "This may be hard.., You know mom said we can't leave the yard." But Betty, Oh Betty, what will we do, How will we get Grrreeble, back to the zoo? The Grrreeble just sat, head in his hands "Johnny, I think that you don't understand." Then he said, "I don't wish to go back to the zoo, I like it here, I'll stay here with you." Betty looked at Johnny and giggled with glee, "Can we keep him? I want him to stay here with me." "No", Johnny said, "No we can't, no, No, NO! as soon as he can, to the zoo he must go!" Johnny looked at the Grrreeble and said with a sigh, "We really do like you, but we must say goodbye." So they played for a little games like frosty fooks frittle with bright red hats and dressum up clothes and loud frustal whistles, you blow through your nose. Then later that morning after eating their brunch they made him a sandwich, dinklebutter and jelly, to take for his lunch, and turning away Grrreeble said, with tears in his eyes, "Thanks, it's been fun, to play with you guys." Now often they visit their friend at the zoo with a dinklebutter sandwich, they hope you'll come too. 9/17/2015

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Date: 8/29/2015 11:50:00 PM
Wonderful take with this sweet write James! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/29/2015 1:56:00 PM
A WONDERFUL Tale! So Very well done. Congrats on the well deserved win!
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James Inman
Date: 8/29/2015 2:41:00 PM
Thanks for the WONDERFUL comment, Carol. How sweet of you.
Date: 8/29/2015 1:40:00 PM
James, this poem is delightful written and rhymed. "his fur touched her skin," and other great, sweet visuals. Congratulations Barbara
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James Inman
Date: 8/30/2015 8:25:00 AM
Barbara, I am so sorry, I was leaving a comment for Carol just before yours. Please forgive me. I do enjoy your visits. I am bad for this, in fact I did something similar with Jan and Richard below.
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 8/29/2015 2:57:00 PM
Did you mean, Barbara? We all do this.
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James Inman
Date: 8/29/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Carol, love your visits.
Date: 8/29/2015 8:59:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 8/29/2015 9:42:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Sorry, for Richard's comment in your box. I hope I'm not the only one this happens to.
Date: 8/29/2015 8:32:00 AM
Fun fun fun! Congrats.
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James Inman
Date: 8/29/2015 9:36:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, fun write.
Date: 8/29/2015 7:46:00 AM
This was awesome, both my daughter and I agreed, how fun it was, and since she is excited to go to the zoo in a couple weeks she hooted every time I said that word, this was very enjoyable!!! Thanks for the write and grats on the win!
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James Inman
Date: 8/29/2015 10:04:00 AM
Casarah, a wonderful contest. It was so much fun writing for it. Thanks for hosting it and I hope you two have fun at the zoo.
Date: 8/23/2015 11:28:00 AM
this is a really cute story. Thinking through the perspective of a child (who the judge is actually gonna have help her judge this contest) I think yours has a very good chance to be on the winner's list. I hope mine does too!
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James Inman
Date: 8/23/2015 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I believe yours does to. By the way, for better or worse, so much of me never quite grew up.
Date: 8/21/2015 7:47:00 PM
James, I loved your little Grreeble creature, your poem is delightful to both child and adult, a winner A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tattered . . .
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James Inman
Date: 8/23/2015 12:48:00 PM
Thanks BW
Date: 8/21/2015 12:12:00 PM
A great little story James...good luck Tim
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James Inman
Date: 8/21/2015 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 8/21/2015 11:08:00 AM
Simply superb James the imagery is delightful - good luck in the contest Cas and Abbie will have a fun time judging this contest! :-) Hugs jan xx7
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James Inman
Date: 8/21/2015 1:44:00 PM
Jan, I think your right. It should be fun. I can't wait to see more of the entrees. Thanks.

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