Grrreeble Left the Zoo

Betty and Johnny, who were seven and eight,
lived close to the zoo, very near the front gate.
 
They visited often, with their mom and their dad,
and always told Gran about the fun that they had.

One day as the wind blew through the Crumpledink trees'
tickling the crinkly bright yellow leaves.

Johnny and Betty decided to play,
out on the porch, where they'd stay there all day.

They opened the door, but to their surprise,
a blue fuzzy creature, smallish in size,

jumped up from the chair and stretched out his hand.
"Pleased to meet you my friend," his words rather bland.

"Who are you?" said Betty with a sheepish grin
as she held out her hand and his fur touched her skin.

"I am what I am, and my name is that too,
I'm a Grrreeble," he said, "and I live at the zoo."

"Then what are you doing here at our house?"
asked Johnny, his voice squeaked like a mouse.

"I saw you at the zoo in the star gazing dome.
You seemed so nice, I followed you home."

"But you can't stay here," Johnny croaked like a frog, "So,
back to the zoo, to the zoo you must go!"

Betty looked at the Grrreeble and said, "This may be hard..,
You know mom said we can't leave the yard."

But Betty, Oh Betty, what will we do,
How will we get Grrreeble, back to the zoo?

The Grrreeble just sat, head in his hands
"Johnny, I think that you don't understand."

Then he said, "I don't wish to go back to the zoo,
I like it here, I'll stay here with you."

Betty looked at Johnny and giggled with glee,
"Can we keep him?  I want him to stay here with me."

"No", Johnny said, "No we can't, no, No, NO!
as soon as he can, to the zoo he must go!"

Johnny looked at the Grrreeble and said with a sigh,
"We really do like you, but we must say goodbye."

So they played for a little 
games like frosty fooks frittle

with bright red hats and dressum up clothes
and loud frustal whistles, you blow through your nose.

Then later that morning after eating their brunch
they made him a sandwich, dinklebutter and jelly, to take for his lunch,

and turning away Grrreeble said, with tears in his eyes,
"Thanks, it's been fun, to play with you guys."

Now often they visit their friend at the zoo
with a dinklebutter sandwich, they hope you'll come too.



9/17/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Wonderful take with this sweet write James! Congrats on big win!
Eastman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 1:56 PM
A WONDERFUL Tale! So Very well done. Congrats on the well deserved win!
Inman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Thanks for the WONDERFUL comment, Carol. How sweet of you.
Campbell Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 1:40 PM
James, this poem is delightful written and rhymed. "his fur touched her skin," and other great, sweet visuals. Congratulations Barbara
Inman Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Barbara, I am so sorry, I was leaving a comment for Carol just before yours. Please forgive me. I do enjoy your visits. I am bad for this, in fact I did something similar with Jan and Richard below.
Campbell Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Did you mean, Barbara? We all do this.
Inman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Carol, love your visits.
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations James:-) hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thanks, Jan. Sorry, for Richard's comment in your box. I hope I'm not the only one this happens to.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Fun fun fun! Congrats.
Inman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Thanks, Richard, fun write.
Nance Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 7:46 AM
This was awesome, both my daughter and I agreed, how fun it was, and since she is excited to go to the zoo in a couple weeks she hooted every time I said that word, this was very enjoyable!!! Thanks for the write and grats on the win!
Inman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Casarah, a wonderful contest. It was so much fun writing for it. Thanks for hosting it and I hope you two have fun at the zoo.
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 11:28 AM
this is a really cute story. Thinking through the perspective of a child (who the judge is actually gonna have help her judge this contest) I think yours has a very good chance to be on the winner's list. I hope mine does too!
Inman Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:51 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I believe yours does to. By the way, for better or worse, so much of me never quite grew up.
La France Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 7:47 PM
James, I loved your little Grreeble creature, your poem is delightful to both child and adult, a winner A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tattered . . .
Inman Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Thanks BW
Smith Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 12:12 PM
A great little story James...good luck Tim
Inman Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Thanks Tim.
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Simply superb James the imagery is delightful - good luck in the contest Cas and Abbie will have a fun time judging this contest! :-) Hugs jan xx7
Inman Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 1:44 PM
Jan, I think your right. It should be fun. I can't wait to see more of the entrees. Thanks.
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