Growing Pains

Sitting by  railroad tracks
Eye to eye with bare, coiling tree branch,
Sunlight caressing half iced river below,
Glittering rainbow  prisms,
And I’ve been here many times before.

When I was seventeen,
On my own,
Playing with freedom for the first time
And I knew everything.

When I was nineteen,
Blue hair, Green shoes,
Red checker pants,
Wide eyed,
Crazed and crying,
Wishing for a train.

When I was twenty-one,
Lying on snow covered tracks,
Looking at moon reflections in his eyes,
Red cheeks, Tender lips,
“Promise me you’ll never forget this moment,”

And now, twenty-seven
Past lives lingering like star dust
Older, wiser, Wondering
Where the next train
Might take me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Inka Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 8:10 PM
I enjoyed this little trip through a decade of your life. Well done Joe
Puddifoot Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:13 PM
this is very well written and vivid with a unique slant, particularly like the last stanza - "past lives lingering like star dust" - lovely - glad my silly poem made you chuckle!
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:00 PM
This is not bad for a first submission. Your work contains decently descriptive words that collectively convey vivid images within a reader's mind. Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here.
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