Growing Old

Once it was a breeze to run and catch a blooming bus
It was the normal thing to do, didn't cause me any fuss
I could walk, and walk could I, until the end of day
But now the little shop close by, is much too far away

I would always love to swim even in the vastest pool
But now I have to paddle, I cannot swim at all
I'd always drop onto my knees, and spring right up again
But me I can't do this no more, it gives me too much pain

I would travel around for miles just to see something
But now too many aches and pains to me such travel brings
Just relaxing in the chair these days is all I want to do
And driving car at night times, this gives me trouble too

Life is getting faster now, I'm in my latter years
Some things I really have to do, they bring me close to tears
I guess I'm  getting too old now, that's just the way it goes
I really can't do much at all, because I'm too damn slow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/28/2016 7:30:00 PM
Oh my, I can really relate to this. Very well written. Age brings us a lot of aches and pains and slows down life, it's true. But I think there are things we can still do and I am inspired by one named Grandma Moses who painted at the age of 77 and sold her paintings, became so famous her artwork were put in postage stamps. ~~~Cynthia
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Date: 3/30/2016 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Vera. I do read and comment on a lot of poems here on poetrysoup whether the poet reads my work and comments or not. It's just love for poetry, I guess.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/30/2016 1:26:00 AM
Cynthia thank you so much for visiting my page and leaving this lovely comment, you are too kind. As I said to Billy in one of my comments please don't think you have to comment on my poems just because I comment on yours, I enjoy reading other people's poems so I do not expect them to comment on mine but thank you ever so much and take care........Vera
Date: 3/5/2016 11:07:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/8/2016 6:24:00 PM
Funom my friend thank you so much for the visit, hope you are well, take care.......Vera
Date: 11/20/2015 7:33:00 AM
Very well penned piece dear Vera. I am just learning to appreciate this youthful state for I know that years are fleeting and some day I will desire these years.......A7! Lydia.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/8/2016 6:23:00 PM
Lydia, I am so sorry I didn't answer your lovely comment, I really don't know how I missed it, yes the years are passing by so fast but at 73 years of age I am enjoying what years I have left, I gather you are quite young at the moment so enjoy, take care my dear..........Vera
Date: 10/6/2015 9:32:00 PM
Dear Vera Now I no I've commented on this one before but I wanted to reread it again, and tell you once more your not that old my friend, what age of the body, does not count, it's how old you feel on the inside, that matters, that's why you and I are about 16 lean and mean looking, right, love your welcome, hey I have trouble just remembering those lighter times of my anicant youth, glad you enjoyed my haunted poems so much but I'm just glad to have found you two here on the soup, cheri
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:44:00 PM
Hello, Vera. I'm glad to see this one. Gave me an idea and me me smile too! This is a well-written piece on the subject. So sorry to have missed this. I see it was posted the week I was sick. Missing you and Peter. hugs!
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/29/2015 1:14:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Kim, yes we are all getting there and for some reason or other I am feeling it more this week, aches and pains but I get over it. hope you are well now. Take care...........Vera...........SM
Date: 9/16/2015 8:06:00 PM
Dear Vera Thank you dear heart for the sweet words on behalf of my father in law, tom is still taking it hard and so am I we loved this man, he was one of those people whom you just can't forget, so we are holding on to the memories, with all of our hearts, thank you again, love you guys take care write more tomorrow I have the whole day off, cheri
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/29/2015 1:09:00 AM
Cheryl my dear thank you so much for the comment, hope Tom is well, it is always the one we really love that have to go but as you say you have the memories and hang on to them, take care my dear love to all. SM take care ..........Vera.
Date: 9/15/2015 1:11:00 PM
Your words speak out for so many of us, if we could keep the future but have our youth of energy back. Now we know why they call it the retirement years. Hugs dear friend.Hope all is well hugs Eve
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/16/2015 1:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve for that most welcomed comment, mind you I do enjoy my retirement years, it would be nice to be able to do some of which I used to do like kneel down and pull weeds out of the garden but it is not meant to be, take care my dear will soup mail you in the next few days.............Vera
Date: 9/9/2015 2:34:00 PM
WOW, Vera, I'm not looking forward in growing old at all...LOL..SKAT
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/9/2015 7:48:00 PM
Skat thank you so much for visiting my site, no old age isn't very kind to us at all, but now that I am just about there I guess I have to grin and bare it, hope you are well, take care.........Vera
Date: 8/31/2015 9:16:00 AM
Many of us would be nodding their head in agreement with what you write, Vera! But at least we admit that aging does leave its effects on us; can't run away from reality of life! May we enjoy each day at a time:) Wishing you all the very best! // paul
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Vera Duggan
Date: 9/1/2015 7:55:00 PM
Thank you Paul, hope you and the wife are well. Yes it is no good not admitting our age, it's here whether we like it or not but as you say we enjoy each day as it comes, can't do much more can we. Take care and regards to your lovely wife..............Vera...
Date: 8/21/2015 6:32:00 PM
We ride that same wagon my friend. Youth has flow away, leaving us in the dust behind. Yet all is as it should be for a doorway awaits us that has great promise! Love this smooth and uplifting poem my friend. By the way, I just posted my tribute write to Peter's poem- The Last Journey.. Was a very hard task to measure up, hope I came close.
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Vera Duggan
Date: 8/26/2015 12:29:00 AM
Thank you for the visit Robert, yes I suppose we are all getting there, I would love to live my life over again, as I absolutely have no regrets, I had a wonderful and charmed life, so free and easy, but now I still do have a charmed life so free and easy.. Love to Riza and Justin, take care my friend..........Vera.
Date: 8/18/2015 8:44:00 PM
I'm in the same boat, Vera. I know it gets frustrating. Growing old sucks! You did a good job showing that in your poem! Love, Kim
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Vera Duggan
Date: 8/19/2015 2:11:00 AM
Hi Kim, yes it does get frustrating at times, thank you so much for taking the time to read, it takes me such a long time to write anything, hope you are well, take care....................Vera.
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