Growing Old

The day when I was a younger Lass
                  never a thought in my young mind
                  soon evolution takes over
                  I try with grace and truth
                  overcome destiny
                  trading beauty
                  for wisdom
                  the gift
                  wise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/23/2013 8:36:00 PM
Shanity, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/24/2013 7:53:00 AM
Thank-you Skat , now when is your Birthday ??
Date: 10/22/2013 10:31:00 PM
nice nonet. Shanity... CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 10/24/2013 7:53:00 AM
Thank-you My Beautiful sisters and friends , I just adore you two !
Date: 10/21/2013 5:44:00 PM
Like the realistic truth and great poetic form. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 12:21:00 AM
Thank-you Karen , when we are young ..we don't realize how fast a decade can go by !
Date: 10/21/2013 9:58:00 AM
Congrats on your winning nonet, Shanity! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:09:00 PM
Thank-you my sweet friend ! This is such an honor amongst all of you !
Date: 10/20/2013 9:06:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:43:00 PM
Thank-you beautiful Sara , you made me smile ;)
Date: 9/28/2013 9:20:00 PM
A poem as this, shows that your true beauty will never fade! This is a really beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/28/2013 10:30:00 PM
Thank-you my sweet friend & poet !
Date: 9/28/2013 11:48:00 AM
Stunning write, Yvette. Nonet is a very difficult form but you make it look easy with this write. I've only ever attempted one and that took some doing!! Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. Licia :-)
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Date: 9/28/2013 12:28:00 PM
Oh Sweet heart ..you can do It ! You are amazing as a poetess , and person with loving heart ~ Yvette
Date: 9/26/2013 1:37:00 PM
Wisdom is worth more than beauty. :o)
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:32:00 PM
very much agreed my poet friend !
Date: 9/26/2013 6:13:00 AM
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Date: 9/26/2013 3:44:00 AM
yvette forever deep inside beautiful
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Date: 9/26/2013 12:00:00 PM
Liam ..you read my poems faithfully , I need to take a day to do the same .
Date: 9/25/2013 8:35:00 PM
Thanks for the entry. Soup mail answered
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Date: 9/26/2013 11:58:00 AM
Thank-you Doctor for inspiration .
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Date: 9/25/2013 10:46:00 PM
Thank-you for the Challenge Dr. Mehta, for you pushed my thinking to a rewarding place !
Date: 9/25/2013 12:03:00 PM
- Growing old with style ... states .... Do not worry! - Well done, Yvette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 12:07:00 PM
you are sweet !! Oh , I see my wrinkles everyday ~~ Can you answer ? Does a nonet form need to have the title in 9 words ? Challenging self in contest inspired by our DR.
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