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Grow Old With Me

Breathless beauty shine bright tonight my loving arms will hold you tight no wind, no storm, no evil tide will whisk you away from my side I'll fly you to a land where eagles soar where mountains climb from the shore guide you to a meadow where nature plays where geysers spout most every day show you a place where the buffalo roam where a simple man can make a home we'll sail the sea under star filled skies gazing deeply into those caramelized eyes we'll have no worries, we'll be carefree so take my hand and grow old with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/8/2015 10:41:00 PM
Sweet words of love like a fairy always find beauty and romance in the kind of love that lasts. Most people don't grow old together anymore. I'm happy to say I married my high school sweetheart, so I relate to your poetry...always touching...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/8/2015 7:29:00 PM
Another 7 Tim!!
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:07:00 AM
sweet as always Tim.. romantically written. :)! but oh it counts forever! hugs back.. :)!
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Date: 3/4/2015 1:50:00 PM
awwh, a lifetime of wonderment... hpw lovely, tim... huggs
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Date: 3/4/2015 1:46:00 PM
- So sweet and beautiful, Tim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 8:15:00 AM
That's the most romantic words a man can ask his beloved, to grow old with him, It speaks of his maturity and willingness to spend the rest of his life, not just the present, with a girl. Splendid write, Tim! :D Kim
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Date: 3/4/2015 6:58:00 AM
What an irresistible invitation! What a dream to be fulfilled! Words of beauty dance in every line while feelings laugh all the way! Excellent writing dear, Tim!
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:29:00 AM
This poem gets me saying ' Holy cow :-B-)'!!This is honest,beautiful and iressistibly romantic.Just like a dream!To my favs because I truely love it-Charma
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Date: 3/4/2015 1:51:00 AM
beautiful and romantic Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2015 10:05:00 PM
Nice rhymes and a smooth flow to this one. And the message aint bad either! BG
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Date: 3/3/2015 9:52:00 PM
Love this swooping away in caring arms poem. 7 dear friend
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Date: 3/3/2015 9:50:00 PM
Lovely write, Tim.
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:59:00 PM
Beautiful words Tim , like this write ... 7 Bev :)
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