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Group Hug

hey God! look at this mess we have down here, can you believe it? you told us to to create a better world and boy, have we blown it can you forgive us and help us try again the only thing is, God, people are angry with hard hearts touch everyone's heart God help us find peace remind us love is easier than hate what the world needs is a group hug submitted on June 24, 2020 for contest OPINION sponsored by KAI MICHAEL NEUMANN

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 4:58:00 AM

I am ready; except wait, would that be violating the social distancing thing? Ugh! This pandemic is creating angry hearts.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/18/2021 4:12:00 PM

You are right Caren!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/25/2020 6:38:00 PM

I really like the way you talk to God, without either polishing the apple or trying to appear more than you are. Just a sincere discussion and request. Brilliant, really. And a group hug would probably help... Only --- perhaps many hugs, just because. Cheers, Gershon

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/25/2020 10:05:00 PM

thanks Gershon, I have a similar one called "Apple Pie Lord" you might find sometime.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/25/2020 5:28:00 PM

I love this poem. A favorite for me. Great one Timothy :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/25/2020 10:05:00 PM

Thank you much Heidi!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2020 6:49:00 AM

Yes. for sure... Love and prayers for you, Blessings too - Gina

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/25/2020 5:16:00 PM

thank you Gina!