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Grounded Love

Grounded Love
When the autumn leaves all begin to fall, As they take a tumble they will recall, There is the proper position and spread, Show colors of yellow, orange and red, So when the passersby stop, take a view, They'll see their soul as colorful as you. Snowflakes share the ground along with the leaves, They do not tumble but they pile and heaves, All is distinctive from all of the rest, Try to appear as charmed being the best, Excelled hopes for a passerby who'd be, With Microscope, gives soul eternity. ...Aged passerby, ...sky, ground, and knows, ...microscopes, colors, souls.
2019 September 15 *2nd Place* Any poem you want to write exactly 100 words ~~Caren Krutsinger
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La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:36 PM
William congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Heartfelt thanks ~ Aloha always William
Chiri Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 12:51 PM
Seems I am always stopping by to congratulate you!;) great win!;)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Ah, thanks ~ Aloha always William
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:22 AM
- A great and colorful poem with 100 words, William - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 10:11 AM
Thank you ~ Aloha always William
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