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I am seeing gray Clouds outside window Through the opened blinds Bare oak tree swayed by The brisk breeze, traffic I feel a draft Paper's surface The round ink pen My faint heartbeat Husband's snores Heat clicks off Trucks' engines Powder Coffee Grits

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Date: 12/18/2024 2:21:00 AM
Oh yess, your own take on the diminished hexaverse form, how interesting and unique! You've showed us and made us feel everything you were feeling while also the aromas that you inhaled... I honestly enjoyed participating in this contest, it was challenging yet gave me a moment to stay grounded and reflect upon my surroundings. Sending you love and light always, best wishes to you ~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/18/2024 4:46:00 AM
Your visit, Hiya, is appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed the contest and being grounded in a moment in time. I always need love (agape) and God's Light in my life. Sara K
Date: 12/15/2024 10:40:00 PM
I see what you see and hear what you hear through your very straightforward and detailed descriptions. This was a very fun and interesting contest that i enjoyed doing! It reminds us sometimes to take a minute to stay grounded. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always dear sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/16/2024 4:11:00 AM
Thank you, IE. Yes, I felt grounded in the moment in time. Sometimes in our lives we need to be grounded just a moment in time to relieve stress or get back focused. I am going to judge the contest. Sara K
Date: 12/13/2024 8:15:00 AM
What a lovely photo Sara, so beautiful. Thanks for a challenging contest, loved every moment. Love and blessings, Jennifer.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer, for the love and blessings. I know the one you write will be so much better than mine. Sara K
Date: 12/10/2024 8:48:00 PM
Hello Sara, you've got soup mail important.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2024 3:31:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Eve. Sara K
Date: 12/8/2024 8:59:00 PM
It's excellent, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/9/2024 4:02:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 12/7/2024 7:37:00 PM
I love this and your contest idea too. Soupmail for ya.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/8/2024 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 12/6/2024 7:31:00 AM
Love it. Almost done with my third book for Nursery rhymes. Sara, you have two, Santa's Elf, Big Orange. Hope you write for my last contest. Hugs my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2024 3:04:00 PM
Oh!! Thank you, Eve, for letting me know that you have another one going on. I will see what I can do. I am not very good with those. I hope this weekend is a good one for you. Sara K
Date: 12/5/2024 8:51:00 AM
Your poem makes me smile! The senses of life that make life tangible, faithful, comforting.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2024 10:04:00 AM
Kim, thank you for the encouraging and uplifting review of my work. Sara K
Date: 12/4/2024 10:30:00 PM
delightful, a sweet atmosphere through the poem, enjoyed
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2024 7:53:00 AM
Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 12/3/2024 7:06:00 PM
This is beautiful poem calling to mind all sensory delights.... what we can see, feel, hear, smell and taste. Well done dear Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2024 5:35:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I hope you do a poem for my contest and write one which I know will be much better than mine. Sara K

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