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Grotesque Names

s--t--i--t--c--h--e--s line my body limbs sown TOGETHER in a grotesque display of LOVE you name r i p p e d as a j g e a g d line upon pale skin ANGRY RED LINES betray the pain fresh raw red real just like you were the last time I saw you? REAL. before you too DENRUT away. O two N people E in who are you? Who are we? who am I? YOU SAID you said and she carves the name of the one she LOVES and watches it bleed bleed bleed away tonight. forget my name and open a vein.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 2:46:00 AM
Ps. Oh, and before I fail to mention this-this was an amazingly creative write....Smile, it is soo good to see "You" again!!!:):) ~
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:40:00 AM
....And I am here to stay for awhile now~And this was another very profound write of "Yours"~As always written from the very depths of "Your Astonishingly Amazing Soul!!!":):)~Smile, no cutting~just healing dear~Lets go view some more of "'Your Precious Heart,' Love To You Always, John!!!":):)~On we go....
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Date: 6/5/2009 2:34:00 AM
Well, why don't I just remember "Your Beautiful Name Madison Thomer," and we start all over!!? Smile, I am soo sorry that I have missed "You"~But as I was telling someone the other day here-someone very close to myself lost a battle last week they have been fighting for a little while-so it took me far away from this place at soup....Yet, "I Never Forgot 'You Madison!!!":):)....Cont....
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