P.S. Awtry Poet Triolet

Groovy Hippy Girl

She is a groovy, hippy girl.

     She loves that funky, trippy beat.

It is her hippy, trippy world!

     She is a groovy, hippy girl.

She dances funky, hippy twirls,

     and when she sits, she taps her feet.

She is a groovy, hippy girl.

     She loves that funky, trippy beat.


1/12/2022

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Panagiota Romios April 1, 2022 at 12:37 PM Congrats, PS. This is a Fav Brings back memories of the Summer of Love, San Francisco 1967....))) Great rhyme and talent?understatement...!! Wonderful to see rhyme in use. Not avoided.,,,,,,I am ku’d out, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith March 8, 2022 at 8:36 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun/wonderful Triolet write. You have the beat as you write away. Have a blessed day.......... P.S. Awtry April 1, 2022 at 9:42 AM ty :)

Christuraj Alex March 8, 2022 at 3:53 AM Great description of the hippy girl. Beautifully written. Congratulations! P.S. Awtry April 1, 2022 at 9:42 AM ty :)

Timothy Mcguire January 18, 2022 at 7:24 PM I like it a lot P.S. Great write. If you get a chance read my poem "1969" I think it relates. P.S. Awtry January 19, 2022 at 7:57 AM I have just hopped over to your poem and really enjoyed it! Thank you for directing me there. I am so glad you liked this one :) ~ps

Judy Ball January 15, 2022 at 3:42 PM Too Cute P.S. Really good rhythm and rhyme. Very upbeat. Love it. God Bless, JB PS They sell Palmetto Hearts in some stores. Same thing. I saw them at WalMart here in Airdrie, Alberta. P.S. Awtry January 15, 2022 at 3:43 PM Hi Judy, I'm glad you liked the poem. I will have to look into the Palmetto hearts :) ~ps

Bj Legros Kelley January 15, 2022 at 2:38 PM Aw, so cute! Love this! This is so Far Out man, you are so totally groovy Andrea! <3 Be blessed today! <3 Bj Legros Kelley January 16, 2022 at 1:22 AM Oh, oops! Lol! That is a high compliment indeed, but still, I can't believe I did that! Well, you are totally groovy Awtry, and so is Andrea :) <3 I wonder if I should delete my first comment, and then it will be out-a-sight, I am so embarrassed. But anyway, I love your poem! :) P.S. Awtry January 15, 2022 at 3:09 PM Thank you BJ—Glad you liked this one. (Sorry I’m not Andrea, but what a compliment!) ~ PS Awtry

Heidi Sands January 15, 2022 at 10:29 AM Oh what a fun poem to be led to today! I really enjoy it :) P.S. Awtry January 15, 2022 at 10:33 AM Oh, good! Thank you Heidi. I had so much fun writing this one :) ~ps

Valsa George January 14, 2022 at 12:37 AM Love the rhythm of her trippy beat ! Great entry dear friend ! Best of Luck P.S. Awtry January 14, 2022 at 7:12 AM Thank you Valsa! :) ~ps

Wren Rushing January 13, 2022 at 6:26 PM I really like this poem! It reads like a song, a hippy, trippy song! Paulette reminds me of my sister! Good luck in the contest! P.S. Awtry January 13, 2022 at 7:11 PM Oh, good! Glad you liked it! And thanks for the luck!

Joseph P. DiMino January 13, 2022 at 4:07 PM Triplet, all right! Like it. Delightful, feet tapping, jiving beat. One can't help but read this, and then want to put on some Oldies But Goodies dancing music. Great write, P.S.! P.S. Awtry January 13, 2022 at 5:40 PM Thank you Joe for the read and the comment! Have a great evening with those “old records off the shelf”! -ps

Geoffrey Brewer January 13, 2022 at 1:28 PM The funky rhythmic beat and images make this a perfect example of a triplet. Well done P.S. P.S. Awtry January 13, 2022 at 1:32 PM Oh, thank you Geoffrey! I was so happy writing this one. I sang this all day! ~ps

Gershon Wolf January 12, 2022 at 6:06 PM Ha, ha! Far out! Like Wow! Outasight! Seriously, this is a barrel of monkeys. Pure enjoyment. :) gw P.S. Awtry January 12, 2022 at 6:09 PM Oh, I am so glad you liked it! I felt like I had cracked the triolet code, writing this one. I am absurdly pleased with it! :D----ps

Darlene De Beaulieu January 12, 2022 at 11:09 AM Hello P.S. Awtry, I like the rhythm of this poem. Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 13, 2022 at 8:52 AM Hello P.S. Awtry, Yes I enjoyed this poem I will . You enjoy your day to my friend. Blessings. P.S. Awtry January 12, 2022 at 11:14 AM Thank you Darlene I am glad you liked it! Hope you have a beautiful day today! :) ~ps

Alexis Y. January 12, 2022 at 9:44 AM Hi PS, I enjoyed the flow and rhythm of your “ upbeat” write. Best wishes in the contest. I appreciate you coming to my page with your condolences. Have a nice day-Alexis P.S. Awtry January 12, 2022 at 10:57 AM Thank you Alexis. I hope you are having a good day. :) ~ps

Vijay Pandit January 12, 2022 at 9:13 AM Lovely beat to your poem, PS. Charming write. P.S. Awtry January 12, 2022 at 10:56 AM Thank you Vijay :) ~ps

Quoth Theraven January 12, 2022 at 8:21 AM P.S., Tapping my foot too, so love this poem's trippy beat. -Richard P.S. Awtry January 12, 2022 at 8:23 AM Oh Good! I was tapping mine--but wanted to know if anybody else heard it, too! Thank you, Richard! :) ~ps