Grooving

After raking hours of 24/7 toil this brain wants to spin with ole jazz’s request… 14th Road at 8 pm sprays lint upon feet much too slow for a jig of a night dance. Somehow, the breeze leaps to resurrect my wired head, as the gravel hiss of the sax purrs and pulsates, allowing spicy vapor to restore the rhythm's passion and slice of gaiety in unbridled recklessness; thrusting upon nerve endings for an evening of choral notes bursting with alchemy. Dazzling to the beat in steel of moonlight, each velvet croon tastes a Coltrane groove as swaying hips bob to the pulse of sweet chaos. I hit the floor barefoot with raked notes climbing into my belly in the heat of brass pitch… after work, the smoky timbre rolls on and on as waxed pipe of rocking blues floats, drenched with raw inspiration! Inspiration Contest Sponsor:Nayda Negron
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Devnath  Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Congrats on your win, my friend Nette. Loved always, bl
Oyewole Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Congrats on your jazzy win my friend. AO
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:26 PM
Nette, congrats with your jazzy poem... luv~PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 4:52 AM
Many Congratulations xx
Delaney Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:15 PM
Excellent Jazz mood. Congratulations Nette
Guzzi Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 6:58 PM
A number one in my book. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 6:03 PM
A dance within a jazzy poem. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Goff Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 5:54 AM
Nette, enjoyed every line! Thanks! Jimbo
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 12:43 AM
raw dance, YES, I think you have captured its essence, Nette. A SURE winner!!
Devnath  Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Wonderful Jazzy enjoyed. Thanks and wish you good luck. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 12:46 PM
You have captured the mood! Well done!
Sivey Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 3:22 PM
I love the raw dance that you describe, there is something special when you hear Jazz! You have told your poem here with such a spectacular charm my friend! I have been busy all day, from early morning to late afternoon, you know how it goes, child's doctors appointment your own doctors appointment, and coming to find out I have a thyroid problem, my daughter is fine though (thank goodness)! It could have been worse! I feel much better having read this poem! Thank you for writing this piece!!
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:51 AM
- Dance a lot when you're young and light of foot ...... when you get old you will be heavy and thick .... lol. - Beautifully written Nette. - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Sounds like a fun evening dancing barefoot to the music. Nicely written and good luck in the contest. love phyl
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 9:24 AM
Winner for sure that is in my opinion..Enjoyed reading your jazzy tune..Thanks for stopping by..I haven't looked at Frank's contest so I guess that I should if I have one that might match up..Hope that this is a great day for you..Sara
Tacito Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 8:12 AM
Cheers to the Coltrane grooves! I want to go dancing now! My hips are ready! This was a fun ride!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 7:02 AM
Dance: The logic of feet, the moment when body and soul unite in expressing the inner self! Your poem a dance of words and moods that charms the reader! Thank you! Hugs!
Nair Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 5:24 AM
Nette, the words bursting with alchemy do a dance of jig here, amazing!! Jag
Manassian Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 2:45 AM
You wove such beautiful images into every line of this poem, Nette! :) I can't make my writing colorful like that! Great write. I know this will do extremely well in the contest. Thanks for your visit to my work. :) Hugs
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