Cona Adams Poet Narrative

Grinding Start

I turned the key,
pressed the gas pedal.
The motor belched
the starter grated.

“No. Not today!
I can’t be late.
I’m teaching the class.
I have to be there!”

Our three-year-old
piped up from the back seat,

“Try it again, Mom.”

The motor coughed, caught,
settled to a steady purr.
My little two-cylinder Fiat,
slow, but steady as she goes,
took me everywhere.

Again, from the back seat,

“I knew it would start, Mom.
I prayed.”

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Paul Callus January 12, 2015 at 11:10 AM Your 3 year old is a firm believer in prayers, Cona! Children's innocence can work wonders! Enjoyed your pleasant poem. // paul Cona Adams January 12, 2015 at 1:10 PM Thank you, Paul. Yes, sometimes they teach us. Thanks for the visit. All the best to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2015 at 2:56 PM - .... No new car from Santa Claus :))) - Enjoy reading, from the child's mouth! - I wish you a lovely weekend,Cona - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Cona Adams January 9, 2015 at 3:08 PM Thank you, Anne Lise, for visiting, and leaving good wishes. May you have a brilliant weekend as well. : - )

Rowdy Yates January 8, 2015 at 2:32 PM Sometimes just the simpless this are the best. My father was a big Rawhide fan. My real name is Rowdy Yates. But enjoyed the read. Cona Adams January 9, 2015 at 6:47 AM Oh, that's cool. Your father is responsible. He took advantage of his last name to give you a famous character's name. I think I would have liked knowing your father.

Robert Nehls January 7, 2015 at 10:59 AM Hi, Cona. So many wonderful lessons can be learned from children. They can certainly lead us to God's heart. Very nice poem, my friend..... Robert. Cona Adams January 7, 2015 at 2:11 PM Yes, they can. Sometimes, they set the example for us worry wart adults. Thanks for the visit.

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 7:33 PM Today I was stuck in the snow and my friend suggested a prayer. Inside my mind I thought it was silly but before I knew it we were on our way. Me of little faith! Cona Adams January 6, 2015 at 8:18 AM Would that we adults, in every situation, possess the faith of a child. Thanks for reading, Richard.