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Grin

The sound of us breathing heavy, the windows of the Oldsmobile sweating as I worked my hands up your shirt. The beads you got in New Orleans. Venturing beyond the tan line. Feeling the softness as we slow danced, grinning, with my chin just off your shoulder. Buying you that scoop neck sweater for Christmas. Pressing my ear tight, listening to your heart. The off the shoulder dress that left me speechless; “My eyes are up here” you said with a playful smirk. Despite our deepest affection some things are taken; and yet, some are unshaken. As I caress and kiss your scars, it is you that makes me grin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2016 2:01:00 PM
Wow. So detailed in all the right ways.. love this line "The beads you got in New Orleans. Venturing beyond the tan line."
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:52:00 AM
A Super Congratulations on your placement in P.D....'s "Femme fatale" contest Luke. Love Carol
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Date: 12/3/2012 3:52:00 AM
Congrats on your HM Luke xx
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Date: 12/2/2012 10:11:00 AM
My heartfelt congratulations on your awesome win Luke! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/2/2012 4:15:00 AM
Luke. :-) Congratulations with your heartfelt poem.. always~ PD
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Date: 11/26/2012 5:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments!
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Date: 11/26/2012 5:48:00 PM
Well done, I was compleatly mesmerized through the whole piece. I was left wanting more. Maybe you will write a sequel. Well done!
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:22:00 PM
Awesome verse! Very descriptive and playfully passionate :D Always, Laura
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