Grim Tim

Timmy was tinkering with a little lock,
When he was spotted by a passing cop,
        A judge sent him to jail
         And now without fail
 He spends each day breaking up rock.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 8:34 PM
G'day John... mmm; brought back memories of a friend in my youthful days except it was more than one lock - thanks John - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 4:57 AM
I guess then Lindsay, there was more than one rock. Thanks Lindsay-------John
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:45 AM
This made me smile John:-)hugs Jan xx
Williams Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 3:58 AM
Crime doesn't pay, so the police say-----thanks Jan=====John
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