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Grieving Lives (By a 15yr Old)

Follow nothing,but sorrow in facts of failure Endure all but hope, joy, and pleasure. Die upon fools and live upon lies Casted a curse that burdans our lives. Beings we are, yet we think we are gods Abhored by the very planet that we live on. To live in a world of despair To live a life filled with fear. And when there is fear, there follows hate Hate driven by difference by fear, by race. An enemy today, and tommarow a friend Having nothing but hate, 'til you understand. A sad life to live, when driven to death By despair, to fear, to hate, to those who wept.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/18/2009 11:25:00 AM
Amazing Jacob, Your Understanding Of This Is Great. Great Job ~ Raiin
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Date: 11/3/2008 3:47:00 PM
wonderful imagery! Bravo!
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Date: 11/2/2008 9:36:00 PM
Fear can be overcome, hate can be processed and redirected. The world is literly what you make it and what you allow to happen and affect you. That being said you have a talent for writing, please post more. Don
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Date: 11/2/2008 8:44:00 PM
love is better than hate anytime. to live is better than death. anyone can hate what is so hard about that? anyone can die what's the big deal. But to love and to live that takes some doing for some people. this was a great poem, but life has a lot of ups and downs i have seen it both ways. things will get better son, just hang in there and keep posting those poems.
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