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Grieving Goodbye

One step I go back, and
I see you holding my hands...
With a smile, walking down the lanes.
Yesterday I acquainted me in you
When your hands grabbed mine in your fears
With such reliance, allaying down the pains.
And Today when I stood still
I saw myself lost in despair
When my hands sorely waved you goodbye.

Another step I go back, and
I see you resting on my shoulder
With an ease, breathing  out all your whimseys.
Yesterday I held myself in you
When you hugged me in your tenderness
With such peace, grieving away all the hearsays.
And Today when I fastened myself
I felt I betrayed your trust
When my arms direly opened to free your life.

Further I stepped to go back, and
I see you lying up on me abreast
With an intimacy, desiring all your fondness.
Yesterday I mellowed my soul in yours'
When you lusted me in your reverences
With such warmth, melting down all the iciness.
And Today when I lie down
I realized I burnt my essence
When my deity hollered out to coffined my soul.

Yet I wanted to go back, and
I see my shadow fading out slowly under the daylight
With such isolation, deafing all those mirthful moments.
Yesterday I was in a state of solitude
Till I acquainted with your heart and soul
With such reliance, peace and warmth, gratifying all forbearance.
And Today I am back, where I was
I raged as it was hard to believe
When my heart panicked to say you GOOD-BYE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/14/2011 7:48:00 PM
It just hurts to read it ! :( I can feel your hurting:(:(:(:( - The Wizard
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Date: 9/6/2011 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's "Lost and Found" contest Swairik. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 8:46:00 PM
A heartfelt write about your grieving goodbye to love, Swairik. Congrats for your top placement!
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations for your superb win! I enjoyed this deep writing.
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Date: 9/4/2011 1:24:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS for the great first place win~~~smile my friend~~~
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Cheers from Cyndi
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congrats Swairik on your grand first place win with this lovely touching poetry luv.. superby written with great emotion..
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. Well done
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:03:00 PM
breathing whimseys, grieving hearsays... verbs crafted of nouns and adjectives... the tone, the tone... very nice write! Congrats on first place in Catie's contest. ~N
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