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This solemn shore of atrophy called grief, would sail on, sail on from this moor of thief - while yesterday I smiled, and did achieve today am stricken to a nodding leave! This buckling of intent, I do perceive is more than time can counter or receive do take more time with me and yet proceed to bolster me - my actions so recede! What fondness should attain in this bereave, it is a mocking sign, its own conceive is born anew, with someone's silenced knave and never felt so sharply, now its slave! has manifested to a halting save - and captured those surrounding . . . . . true love's grave!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Date: 12/21/2008 11:53:00 AM
Paula, Congratulations on Your POEM " Grief " being Featured This Week You have touched my heart with sadness with this POEM The message so real LOVE the Rhyme Merry Christmas to YOU and YOURS and may the New Year bring Health and Prosperity...HG
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Date: 12/17/2008 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to a process of life that many chose to ignore with drugs/alcohol/shopping or anything else they can use not to FEEL. What you have expressed here is real and I do thank you Ms. Paula. Great writing and a well-deserved selection featured this week. Congratulations and blessings for you in '09 !!
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Date: 12/17/2008 7:19:00 AM
Paula congrats on having your poetry featured this week - merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:48:00 PM
Dear Paula, I remember this sonnet from when you originally wrote it. A masterpiece! Lainie
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 1:46:00 PM
Excellent! One thought, last line I think"captured true love's grave!" would work better
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Paula. Love, Carol
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