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Grief

Your empty song resonating through the cavernous room Loss and despair: a constant left behind Pain dripping from the darkness, destroying all shields A forgotten emotion lifeless in the corner The overbearing blackness out shadowing the light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 2:22:00 AM
this sounds like it comes from the heart. Really enjoyed reading it. Best Regards- Paul
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Date: 5/30/2010 11:59:00 PM
This is very well written. I can sense the emotional strain in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:33:00 PM
The sad reactions to a lost one mourning alone springs to mind. You can feel the emotion >> James
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