Grief

Your empty song resonating through the cavernous room
Loss and despair: a constant left behind
Pain dripping from the darkness, destroying all shields
A forgotten emotion lifeless in the corner
The overbearing blackness out shadowing the light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Stacey Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 2:22 AM
this sounds like it comes from the heart. Really enjoyed reading it. Best Regards- Paul
Spence Sr Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 11:59 PM
This is very well written. I can sense the emotional strain in this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Great job! Joseph
Fraser Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 1:33 PM
The sad reactions to a lost one mourning alone springs to mind. You can feel the emotion >> James
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