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Greyheaded Dreams

old women still have dreams so they lie restlessly in soft single beds away from mirrors that fracture their expectations; they turn towards walls where cracks can be smoothed with shaking fingers and shadows can be reshaped into ageless promise...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round Bernadette. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/8/2010 8:03:00 PM
Beautifully real. Even the nouns tug at me. Well done, Bernadette!
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bernadette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2010 3:34:00 AM
Touching in more ways than one. There's meaning behind your words.
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:05:00 PM
Just beginning to comprehend what you have said and you have said it very well
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:27:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 4:43:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, good one!!
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Date: 4/4/2010 4:05:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about in this concise poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:39:00 PM
Bernadette, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 4/4/2010 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured peom this week. God bless you. Ernilando
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