Grey Dissociation

Grey Dissociation 
GREY - - You can barely SEE through the haze of the dissociative fog shrouded in heavy, BLACK, looming, doubt. 
GREY - - Listen to the SOUND of almost nothing, like you’re under the BLUE sea only hearing the waves that you’ve made with your existence. 
GREY - - You can only SMELL the GREEN tea that you let turn to room temperature. 
GREY - - The only thing that brings you back is the TASTE of the blazing RED hot sauce that burns you when you bring it to your lips.
GREY - - The funny thing about dissociation is you can’t FEEL anything but the maddening PURPLE fog as if you’ve fallen down the rabbit hole. 

You get used to seeing the heavy black fog, 
So much that the sound of the rumbling blue sea of your mind sometimes goes silent. 
The normal things in life such as the smell of the green tea you made an hour ago, 
And the taste of the red chili hot sauce still on your lips,
Don’t matter when you can’t feel anything but the maddening purple FOG. 


Katie Stone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 4:59 PM
many congrats on your win Katie:-) hugs jan xx
Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Congrats!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations! I enjoyed reading this one.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 2:51 PM
'Twas a gray morn that turned into a golden day here!!!Congrats on your color being in the winners' list..SK
Stone Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Thank you! :D Congrats on yours as well. It was so good that now I really want blueberry pie.
A  Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Katie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Reams Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Congrats on your win Katie! Thank you for entering into my contest.
Stone Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Thank you! :D I hadn't realized I got an honorable mention until I came back on today. I really enjoyed doing it. I wouldn't have thought of the poem otherwise.
A  Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Katie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Stone Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Well, thank you. :D I can't wait to post and read many poems on here!
A   Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Hi Katie, thank you for the sweet reply. I'm going to check if you have a new poem, I can read tonight. We are so many on this site. You are going to have a wonderful time here. I promise. LINDA
Boddie Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:15 PM
as a black man pledged to forever serve the blue and white....I will walk the Golden Streets Of Heaven eating oranges while drinking all the red Kool-Aid in sight....lol....nicely done Katie for my first read....;)
Stone Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Aw, thanks. :D
A   Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Katie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Stone Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Hello! :D Thanks for welcoming me. I was shocked to get comments so quickly. Thank you so much. I'll be following you as well!
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