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Greens of the Forest

The greens of the forest open my mind tantalizing me with their well-kept secrets wowing me with their varieties and textures refreshing me with a shiny coolness not found in concrete landscapes or graffiti-decorated boxcar yards. Bringing with her loveliness side dishes of baby blue soft sky and dainty pure scented violets that arouse my dendrites and entice my imagination like nothing else does.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/28/2018 3:17:00 PM
A wonderful piece of poetry. "refreshing me with a shiny coolness not found in concrete landscapes or graffiti-decorated boxcar yards." I love this line. Very well-painted.."Fav'd".
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2018 8:52:00 PM
Thank you M.L. if you think I am a city slicker, you now know that was not me.
Date: 12/27/2018 5:31:00 PM
I can smell the crisp pine now (beautiful line 'dainty pure scented violets') an air freshener just can't duplicate it!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/27/2018 10:13:00 PM
I love violets, I swear they hide the real faeries.

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