Yassmin Elnazer Poet Free verse

Green Wave

a wave of green
carrying me away
to a land of hope
a place with just peace
the green wave flowing along the tough hill
screaming the impossible I will kill
the soft leaves running on the face of rocks
changing every unpleasant view
green carries welfare,true
the green wave running through me
planting harmony
with earth
what a lovely view,
what a dreamy place!

inspired by:

http://ajaytao2010.wordpress.com/2013/04/08/maravian-field-marek-kiedrowski/#comment-17502

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Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 3:18 PM yassmin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 1:30 AM Hi Yassmin, a wonderful poem to read. SKAT

Vicky Tsiluma September 18, 2013 at 9:45 AM Beautifully done Yassmin! I like how you said 'just peace', it brings out more than just calmness, it shows serenity. Very well penned!

Connie Marcum Wong April 15, 2013 at 12:36 AM To contemplate the beauty is to find peace. Lovely Yassmin.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2013 at 10:52 AM - A nice poem to read Yassmin, like it very much. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Yassmin Elnazer April 10, 2013 at 6:21 PM glad you liked it,I loved your poems to:)