Green Velvet

Impoverished, destitute no money to spare
This woman with green eyes and cascading hair 
On a mission to find something to wear
Impress she must as though she hadn't a care
Green velvet drapes hanging in her foyer
Torn down and fashioned just for her
This woman in green shown like a mare
Femme fatal, Scarlett O'Hara, as no others compare
Dressed to kill as only she dare
In the green dress that she did wear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Hello Michael Craig, Scarlett O'Hara, was a strong woman doing what she had to do. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Hello Michael Craig, yes she was special. I have seen this movie,and enjoyed it. You are welcomed. have a nice day my friend.
Craig Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Yes, she was and boy did she do it her way, even though it was just a movie. Thanks for reading it. -Darlene
Hamilton Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Nice poem, and congrats on your win Michael! I think this is a mono rhyme, free verse doesn't rhyme, just a fyi!
Craig Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Thanks for the Congrats. And the needed fyi. Thanks again
Craig Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Yes she was and beautiful. Thanks for liking the poem. - Mike
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 5:31 PM
she was quite the character, wasn't she? Loved the movie and your poem!
Craig Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Yes she was and beautiful. Thanks for liking the poem. - Mike
Na Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 12:14 AM
Congrats on your winning Poem Michael
Craig Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:31 AM
I'm terribly sorry I did not respond to your comment sooner. Thank you for reading it and the congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:26 PM
Wonderful tribute. Well penned, Michael.
Na Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 3:31 PM
nice piece. lol you know how you get ads when you look at someones poem. well on your ad it shows green dresses for sale :) thanks for sharing this
Craig Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:36 AM
LOL that is so funny. Glad you found it entertaining.
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